We Are One
The gift we give each other49 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
What a beautiful love story you have written. I am very envious. I think this is an excellent entry for the love story competition. Good luck. Jen.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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What a beautiful love story you have written. I am very envious. I think this is an excellent entry for the love story competition. Good luck. Jen.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you Jen for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from ameen786
A lovely tribute to a partner/spouse in lovely and meaningful verses with excellent rhyming and superb flow; thanks for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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A lovely tribute to a partner/spouse in lovely and meaningful verses with excellent rhyming and superb flow; thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you kind comments and good luck wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a truly beautifully penned rhyming love poem, my friend. I truly love the choice of artwork for this--unique and lovely. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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This is a truly beautifully penned rhyming love poem, my friend. I truly love the choice of artwork for this--unique and lovely. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you Debbie for this wonderful review and for the extra special rating. I greatly appreciate you kind comments and encouragement.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO JMF4119: I've always believed that together we stand, divided we fall. Together in love, or no love at all. No woman, no man is an island. Everybody needs love. We must stand for someone, or we'll fall for anyone. God said. "It is not good that man should be alone. I will
make him a helper comparable to him. So God made woman; and brought her to the man.
"WOW! THANKS GOD!" We are united, she (my wife) and me. God made it that way, so that's how it should be. Your poem here expresses just how I feel. Man and woman, in "LOVE. This gift we give each other--makes us whole. " rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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HELLO JMF4119: I've always believed that together we stand, divided we fall. Together in love, or no love at all. No woman, no man is an island. Everybody needs love. We must stand for someone, or we'll fall for anyone. God said. "It is not good that man should be alone. I will
make him a helper comparable to him. So God made woman; and brought her to the man.
"WOW! THANKS GOD!" We are united, she (my wife) and me. God made it that way, so that's how it should be. Your poem here expresses just how I feel. Man and woman, in "LOVE. This gift we give each other--makes us whole. " rhonnie69.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you rhonnie for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you encouraging comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO JMF4119: I've always believed that together we stand, divided we fall. Together in love, or no love at all. No woman, no man is an island. Everybody needs love. We must stand for someone, or we'll fall for anyone. God said. "It is not good that man should be alone. I will
make him a helper comparable to him. So God made woman; and brought her to the man.
"WOW! THANKS GOD!" We are united, she (my wife) and me. God made it that way, so that's how it should be. Your poem here expresses just how I feel. Man and woman, in "LOVE. This gift we give each other--makes us whole. " rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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HELLO JMF4119: I've always believed that together we stand, divided we fall. Together in love, or no love at all. No woman, no man is an island. Everybody needs love. We must stand for someone, or we'll fall for anyone. God said. "It is not good that man should be alone. I will
make him a helper comparable to him. So God made woman; and brought her to the man.
"WOW! THANKS GOD!" We are united, she (my wife) and me. God made it that way, so that's how it should be. Your poem here expresses just how I feel. Man and woman, in "LOVE. This gift we give each other--makes us whole. " rhonnie69.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thanks again rhonnie.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
How fun to write a love poem that is upbeat and sexy-fun. This was a joy to read. It makes a great entry to the love poem poetry contest. I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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How fun to write a love poem that is upbeat and sexy-fun. This was a joy to read. It makes a great entry to the love poem poetry contest. I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Cindy for this wonderful review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from meeshu
this is such a nice love poem. simple and honest. has a peaceful feel,
the just waking up on a Saturday feel. well written, good luck, JMF......meeshu
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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this is such a nice love poem. simple and honest. has a peaceful feel,
the just waking up on a Saturday feel. well written, good luck, JMF......meeshu
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you meeshu for this wonderful review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"WE Are One", is a well-written, delightfully descriptive and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to reading your next post.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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"WE Are One", is a well-written, delightfully descriptive and heart-warming piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to reading your next post.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you duchess for this wonderful review. I always appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
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Janet, as always, you're more than welcome.
Best wishes, take care and God bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from happykat4
Nice poem. She wakes in the morning and compares her lovers eyes to heavens sky color, but the eyes mystify. quickly the reader knows she loves her mate and the last verse says it all the gift of love makes them whole..nice work. good luck in the contest. Kat
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Nice poem. She wakes in the morning and compares her lovers eyes to heavens sky color, but the eyes mystify. quickly the reader knows she loves her mate and the last verse says it all the gift of love makes them whole..nice work. good luck in the contest. Kat
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Kat for this wonderful review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely romantic poem and what's even nicer is that it's true. Love doesn't come along every day and I'm happy for you. You've expressed romance and true caring well in your poem. Nice rhyming. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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This is a lovely romantic poem and what's even nicer is that it's true. Love doesn't come along every day and I'm happy for you. You've expressed romance and true caring well in your poem. Nice rhyming. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018
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Thank you Marilyn for this wonderful review. I always appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
