Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Beautiful love poem. I like how each stanza has a look from a distance (like the at the sky) and then back to the beloved one and resolves in the security and joy of the love relationship.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018

Thank you for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you encouraging comments.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

Wow, I really envy couples who are still going strong despite the passing of years and age. You are lucky to be married to such a good and loving husband. Your poem speaks of your deep love and devotion to each other. God bless. Very well done poem.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thank you for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you encouraging comments.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

JMF4119,

Thoughts are expressed and described well. You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. Very enchanted atmosphere, non-judgmental, enjoyable and thrilling. The theme was good. The artwork complemented your poem.

There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.

The words you chose worked well.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thank you Oatmeal for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you encouraging comments.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

This is a beautiful love poem, Janet. I like the movement from sky to husband's eyes, the waking of day with his awakening, and the beauty of love eagerly shared. Very well done. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thank you Nancy for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you encouraging comments..

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This is an excellent entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. Your thoughts and words flowed beautifully throughout this verse. Your love and devotion shine through. Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thank you for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you kind comments.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

this is a beautiful tribute to your spouse dear janet! i can breathe in your love and let a sigh for i have also found a person to share and spend my life with.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a huge hug!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thank you rebekka for this wonderful review and those special stars. I greatly appreciate you kind comments and good luck wishes.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from antonieta

Excellent

Beautiful poem full of imagery: the cobalt sky; the blue eyes like heaven; the smile brighter than the stars that shine. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thank youantonieta for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you kind comments.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, :)

I wish you all the luck in the contest.
Congratulations on being recognized and all-time best.
I love the fact that he still 'rocks your world'. I think that is so sweet and beautiful. Too many couples have one argument and run for the divorce lawyer. It's nice to know people stay together. :)

Nome

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thank you Rasmine for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you kind comments and good luck wishes.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Descriptive language used throughout this well crafted poem includes "cobalt sky" and "white contrails". Obvious how you feel about each other. Should make an interesting entry into this contest.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thank you Brett for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you kind comments.

Blessings
Janet

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

This is a good entry for the contest. My husband and I have been together 39 years. And I will be devastated if he dies first. I hope I go first. A very nice love poem. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018

Thank you Pam for this wonderful review. I greatly appreciate you kind comments.

Blessings
Janet