Dismal
3 line poem 5-7-52 total reviews
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, what a poetically dismal place you paint with your words, and a room without a window would be a bit sad. I certainly enjoy a room with a view.
Good word choices delivered and the picture suits them, thanks for sharing your lovely poem and best of luck in the contest, Ana
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Hello, what a poetically dismal place you paint with your words, and a room without a window would be a bit sad. I certainly enjoy a room with a view.
Good word choices delivered and the picture suits them, thanks for sharing your lovely poem and best of luck in the contest, Ana
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thank you for thinking my poem is poetic and lovely! That means a lot.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A question that is sometimes asked in psychological examines is: You are in a white room with no door and no window. What are you feeling? Your poem gives interesting answers.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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A question that is sometimes asked in psychological examines is: You are in a white room with no door and no window. What are you feeling? Your poem gives interesting answers.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your review. That white room with no door and no window idea makes me feel like I can't breathe. A window opens the world to possibilities.
