Sheep Follow
1-6-1 Scathing Social Admonishment10 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Baker
"Sheep follow" is a good poem and how true. The format of these little poems with their syllable count and the rhythm rhyme on each line are so appropriate for making a point.
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"Sheep follow" is a good poem and how true. The format of these little poems with their syllable count and the rhythm rhyme on each line are so appropriate for making a point.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Hmmm...a very compelling little poem that in only a few words you are able to make readers stop and think. A great entry to the 1-6-1 contest. I wish you the best of luck.
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Hmmm...a very compelling little poem that in only a few words you are able to make readers stop and think. A great entry to the 1-6-1 contest. I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I thing this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells a sad truth.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
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I thing this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse tells a sad truth.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
Comment from Sherman541
Sad, but true sheep do follow and look where does it lead, over the ledge and possibly to their death. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
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Sad, but true sheep do follow and look where does it lead, over the ledge and possibly to their death. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
Comment from Harry Smith
This is an exceptional entry for the contest. The picture selection really compliments the poem that has lots and lots of imagery.
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This is an exceptional entry for the contest. The picture selection really compliments the poem that has lots and lots of imagery.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
Lemmings would do well, too!
A very sound social commentary/admonishment of a number of issues on a number of levels. Very aptly presented in a 1/6/1 poetic offering. Kudos!
Best Wishes as well!
diane
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Hello Mystery Writer,
Lemmings would do well, too!
A very sound social commentary/admonishment of a number of issues on a number of levels. Very aptly presented in a 1/6/1 poetic offering. Kudos!
Best Wishes as well!
diane
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
Comment from karenina
What your political view is dictates whose poster you'd plaster over the wall this hang on.....I'm no meek sheep...it's our prez, the king of inept tweets, big chief little hands....and if you don't agree, it's fine with me!
Karenina
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What your political view is dictates whose poster you'd plaster over the wall this hang on.....I'm no meek sheep...it's our prez, the king of inept tweets, big chief little hands....and if you don't agree, it's fine with me!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello ... I enjoyed this, it is a bit different and your picture suits the poem very well. I think humans are more like sheep than we'd care to hear. We follow the trends even if they're no good for us, and this is what the poem spoke to me about. Thanks for being so generous with your writing, and it is a work I would recommend to other readers for review, Ana.
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Hello ... I enjoyed this, it is a bit different and your picture suits the poem very well. I think humans are more like sheep than we'd care to hear. We follow the trends even if they're no good for us, and this is what the poem spoke to me about. Thanks for being so generous with your writing, and it is a work I would recommend to other readers for review, Ana.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem and entry for the contest
with three solid rhymes and the correct syllables
Common sense doesn't seem very common these days
when even the news is fake, but believed
Perfect art work to match
Well done
Good luck with the sheep and in the contest
RS
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This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem and entry for the contest
with three solid rhymes and the correct syllables
Common sense doesn't seem very common these days
when even the news is fake, but believed
Perfect art work to match
Well done
Good luck with the sheep and in the contest
RS
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
Comment from royowen
I think the sheep personifies the true "fighting " spirit of the hum being, give me a challenge, and what do I do? Have a look to see what others are doing, and do the same? Well done. Great artwork, excellent entry in the contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
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I think the sheep personifies the true "fighting " spirit of the hum being, give me a challenge, and what do I do? Have a look to see what others are doing, and do the same? Well done. Great artwork, excellent entry in the contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
