Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Great presentation with artwork and poem. Well thought out and clearly written. The repeat of early worked well. Good b-alliteration. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2018

Thanks so much for the great comments and review!!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5 about birds, The Early Bird, has the proper set up and relates one of the problems with being the first to arrive. Waiting.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Bye Bye Blackbird writing prompt.
Your short verse is cute.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hi :)
Your entry meets the criteria for the writing prompt.
- 5-7-5 syllable count
- about a bird / birds
I enjoy your humour and the presentation also.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards, Debra :)

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018

Thank you for the good review.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

that's great, pretty funny. good entry for5-7-5 bird contest. the title of the art here should be "watta u lookin at?" good look in the contest and I look forward
to reading more.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks so much for the good review.

Comment from Katya

Excellent

Hee-hee-hee! That's great! I bet you are!
It took me some real time to make sense of the picture, though. Once having done so, I have to say I LOVE IT!

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks so much for the great review.

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hi, I'm sure that worm is glad he's running late, LOL. I liked your lovely poem with the gorgeous picture, a work that will have wide appeal. I noticed it's for the 'bye bye blackbird' competition and best of luck with this well-written entry. Ana.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks so much for the great review.

Comment from Marisela Contona

Excellent

This is a nice enjoyable piece very lighthearted poem. The flow of this piece was nice. I also liked the image you chose because, it matches the subject matter of your piece.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks so much! I appreciate your comments.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Somebody get this Type A feathered thing a coffee and have him chill a minute! When you beat the worm you seriously need a little birdie life! Cracked me up!

Karenina

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks for your great review.

reply by karenina on 11-Apr-2018

Too funny!

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

Excellent write that is outstanding for the contest. The picture selection is outstanding and compliments the poem. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks so much for the good review.