Summer Serenade
5-7-5 Bye-bye blackbird5 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Baker
I loved this little poem with the beautiful picture. "Summer Serenade" is written with the corect number of syllables for the contest. I have a nest of swallows on my verandah.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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I loved this little poem with the beautiful picture. "Summer Serenade" is written with the corect number of syllables for the contest. I have a nest of swallows on my verandah.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Swallows are such welcome sight -especially with this long winter ! thanks for reading zanya
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You're welcome.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your well-written, meaningful poem. It flows with the good alliteration of s letters and sounds and I like your message and artwork choice.
angel123
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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I enjoyed reading your well-written, meaningful poem. It flows with the good alliteration of s letters and sounds and I like your message and artwork choice.
angel123
Comment Written 12-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Thanks for such an encouraging review zanya
Comment from Katya
Very pleasant and cheerful early-summer poem! When do the swallows arrive where you are? In April? or later? Anyway, nice writing, nice picture to go with it.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Very pleasant and cheerful early-summer poem! When do the swallows arrive where you are? In April? or later? Anyway, nice writing, nice picture to go with it.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from tfawcus
What a wonderful sight those first swallows of the summer are! One really has the sense of balmy evenings again. I think that we particularly welcome them because they return like old friends to the same nesting places year by year.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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What a wonderful sight those first swallows of the summer are! One really has the sense of balmy evenings again. I think that we particularly welcome them because they return like old friends to the same nesting places year by year.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Yes - a welcome sight..thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the mystic composition of music as if the swallow in summer serenade is in finer participation and playing the music and welcoming the listeners around with the bidding bye to blackbird; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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This speaks the mystic composition of music as if the swallow in summer serenade is in finer participation and playing the music and welcoming the listeners around with the bidding bye to blackbird; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2018
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Thanks for reading zanya
