Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This alliterative poem, Broken, which may streamline the novel, Madame Bovary, besets business backstabbers with ultimate bedlam.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2018

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

Writer was something beautiful broken you did a magnificent job with your "Bs" but I love the artwork that you chose to go along with this is so beautiful and perhaps it's supposed to represent something broken but I just love the color scheme of the picture itself. Good job

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hello Poet -

You followed all the rules on this one. My favorite line is:
Baudelaire bragged behind Bovary's back -

Good luck in the contest.

Kim

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2018

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, from business, bouquets, and Baudelaire, you just about cover it all in this great poem bursting with Alliteration. Too clever!! If alliteration occurs in my poems it's by accident, LOL

I think this is a very strong entry for the contest and best of luck, Ana.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

The visual is really nice - small villages would most likely be aware of all you speak of. What a great job with all the Bs. You must have thought long for all those words that started with a B. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Wow... Wow... double wow... That poem (love Gaugin) is sensational... I have to wrap my mind around the B's that go on eloquently forever. thanks. yours, diana

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

I found this work to be very unique and very delightful in every dimension. The artwork and coloration is lovely and the presentation and delivery of the poem is outstanding and totally enjoyable. I thank this author for a big smile and delight! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

Wow. I LOVE luscious, literary...alliteration. What a fun writing prompt to respond too. Quite a challenge, but you have pulled it off and with a very fine poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Alliteration Celebration writing prompt.
Well done with your "B" verse. It tells a story and flows smoothly.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A very clever write and quite hard to achieve. The Baudelaire/Bovary's connection is clever too, i wish you luck with the contest, aliteration rules here, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018