Life's goal
a contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from Cheryl Baker
"Life's Goal" is a good little poem. The syllable count for eah line is apprpriate for the competition. I like the rhyming scheme which applies to each line. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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"Life's Goal" is a good little poem. The syllable count for eah line is apprpriate for the competition. I like the rhyming scheme which applies to each line. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
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Hello Cheryl, I appreciate your time and the kind review; thank you very much.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Tootie
This is awesome. I love what it says in these few words. So true! And I really like the artwork too. Wishing you the best in the contest. Well done! God Bless.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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This is awesome. I love what it says in these few words. So true! And I really like the artwork too. Wishing you the best in the contest. Well done! God Bless.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hello Tootie, I appreciate your visit and am so glad that you like the write; thank you very much for the wonderful review and God bless you.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
I just read a perfect rhyming 1-6-1 poem for this prompt contest it has a meaning to me
that the whole soul need essence to help full fill
our desired goal
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hello author
I just read a perfect rhyming 1-6-1 poem for this prompt contest it has a meaning to me
that the whole soul need essence to help full fill
our desired goal
Gert
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Gert my friend, I love your lovely insights and thank you for visiting, God bless you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Life's Goal, uses the eight syllables and uni-rhyme lines to remind us of that our inner self is the living part of us that transcends from this cage to the freedom of the heavenly plane.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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This 1-6-1, Life's Goal, uses the eight syllables and uni-rhyme lines to remind us of that our inner self is the living part of us that transcends from this cage to the freedom of the heavenly plane.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hello Bill, thank you for stopping by and the wonderful insights.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Wow this is awesome, with what you were given to work with and the words that you came up with I really do applaud you. You fulfilled each requirement and I'll say that you exceeded the requirements with a statement saying that a mans soul completes him
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Wow this is awesome, with what you were given to work with and the words that you came up with I really do applaud you. You fulfilled each requirement and I'll say that you exceeded the requirements with a statement saying that a mans soul completes him
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hello Mary, I am pleased to read your wonderful and encouraging comments and so glad that you like the write; thank you very much.
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Thank my pleasure
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Comment from rspoet
This is a very good 1-6-1 poem and entry for the contest
with the correct syllables and three excellent rhymes
There's no better guide in life than the soul
Excellent picture choice to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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This is a very good 1-6-1 poem and entry for the contest
with the correct syllables and three excellent rhymes
There's no better guide in life than the soul
Excellent picture choice to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hello RS, my friend very kind of you to visit; I appreciate your time and the insights; thank you very much.
Comment from Marisela Contona
This is a very powerful and, deep poems about man's goals, and lifes goals, and obstacles. The photo goes well with this piece.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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This is a very powerful and, deep poems about man's goals, and lifes goals, and obstacles. The photo goes well with this piece.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hello Marisela, my friend I am glad that you like the write; I appreciate your time and the insights; thank you very much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse speaks of the soul of man.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poetry writing prompt.
Your short verse speaks of the soul of man.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hi Sharon, glad you like the write; I appreciate your visit and the kind review; thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a positive write and I can identify with it, a goal in life to become whole to complete our soul is a very good statement and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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This is a positive write and I can identify with it, a goal in life to become whole to complete our soul is a very good statement and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hello Dolly, I appreciate your time and the thoughtful and encouraging comments; thank you very much.
