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Veronica is sent back again

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Comment from wordsfromsue
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I can't believe you left us hanging as to how everyone's going to take to Francis!!
HOW am I suppose to get any sleep, wondering how it's going to turn out?

Brilliant chapter!

You're really on fire with this book, Sandra. :-)

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    LOL! I'm a bit of a tease, aren't I? You have to let me have a bit of fun now and again. Lol. Thank you so much, Sue, for brightening my evening. I'm off to bed soon so you can know I'm going as a happy bunny! Thank you so much for giving me another set of six stars! You are so generous, and I love you for it!! Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
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Boy, do I love Rosie! There are few people who know how to handle a bully, but she's not thinking like that. She is just saying and doing what she knows to be the truth, and to hell with the consequences. We could all do with someone like her in our corner when the chips are down, but her sort are few and far between!

I cant wait to find out what happens next.

Hugs from cloudy Glasgow,

Alexis xxx

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Thank you so much, Alexis, for this lovely review and all those lovely, shiny stars. You are always so supportive, and I really appreciate you. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Zue65
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The story seems to be ending on a positive note. But of course it will depend on the author how the plot will turn out. The twists I guess are slowly untangled and I will wait for the next post to find out. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Thank you so much for your great observations, Susan. The meeting with Rosie and Francis is coming up next. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story. Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Sandra, well...well....Sir Creep of the Week,....may let Francis go with Joe and Rosie...Rosie reminds me of Lady Ann...and me of course...LOL...sometimes you just have to let a woman take charge...LOL...I'm sure Rosie will have no problem with Francis...lets see what Sir Creep will come up with...sooooo very well written sweet angel...awesome chapter...I could live in this house...love your story told you...love you so lots my wonderful friend...Linda xxoo

my love to Ian...and my prayers...I hope he is doing well...you too...take care...love

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Thank you so very much, Linda, for another wonderful review. I could live in that house too, but only if I had some people to do the housework! lol. Rosie and Francis meet in the next part! Love you, too, my friend. Big hugs!! Sandra xxxxx

    How is your mother? I'm worried about her, I truly hope she's feeling a bit better. You take care, too, you've had a lot of stress lately and I don't want to hear you're poorly, too. Lots of love, my friend. xxx
reply by l.raven on 11-Apr-2018
    I hope they are meeting in the next part...or that's the longest door opening I have ever seen...LOL...

    Mom is still not well...she is coughing bad...but they have here on meds...I am ok so far...and you stay in good health as well...you are to needed...you are so welcome my sweet angel...love you lotsest...xxoo
Comment from Ben Colder
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Your story is interesting. Dealing with ghost? Poor Sir John. Deal with women is challenge enough now a sister. I see nothing wrong with the English writte in this saga. Well done my friend. Blessing

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Aww, thank you so much, Ben, for all those stars and wonderful review. Dealing with women is a challenge enough.... LOL!! You are so funny!! Big hugs, my friend! :) Sandy xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This is another wonderful post. I like Rosie too, she's a good strong character. I am sure everything will work out, but I'm sure there's going to be a few more hiccups before we get there.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Thank you, Barbara. I'm so pleased you like Rosie, she has had lots of approval from the readers, I'm chuffed she has your's, too. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from JDRBAR
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As usual, your story moves right along and you've shown Rosie in a great light. However, please don't take offense, but I found Sir John to be out of character. A simple act of a cap floating across the room had him terrified and in disbelief of his sister's ghostly existence, but when all hell breaks loose with Veronica's chaotic upheaval, he seems to take it in stride, and does as well with Rosie's tirade. Nothing really seems to bother him in this chapter. It moved along too smoothly. Just my opinion my friend.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    You've raised some good points, Diane, I'll take another look at that. I'm glad you mentioned it, never be afraid to tell me your thoughts, that's exactly what I look out for on Fanstory. This book and the previous one, wouldn't have happened without the input you all give me. Thank you so much!! Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
reply by JDRBAR on 11-Apr-2018
    Any time Sandy. It's what I'd like in reviews of my own writing.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Thanks for the pleasure of reading another fine chapter of your book. Now, I'm just hoping something doesn't change that might cause Sir John to renege on his plan to let Joe and Rosie take Francis. Great chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    aw, thank you so much for the six stars, Ric! I really appreciate your kindness. Than you for the lovely review, too. We'll see what happens next in a few days. I'm just waiting for Veronica to tell me! lol! Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from frogbook
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Another great one-way to handle the guy ladies. And seems like all will work out....I think. Great place to end the chapter and leave the audience on the edge of the seat.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018
    Thank you so much, Joanne, for your wonderful review and all the lovely stars! I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. Fingers crossed it goes well when the door is opened. :)) Big hugs, my friend. xxx
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Sandra, yet again a wonderful chapter. I really like this Rosie. She's very matter of fact, and I think that's what Gwendolyn likes about her as well. She'll know her son will be in good hands. And most important, Rosie has the nerve to stand up to Sir John. A wonderfully written chapter. A big hug. Ulla xxxx

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
    Oh, Ulla, thank you so much! I'm still cringing about that mistake. I owe you big time. I'm so pleased you like Rosie, she's becoming as popular as Mildred. lol. Yes, she speaks her mind, no messing with our Rosie. Thank you for the 6, my friend. you really are so kind. Big hugs. Sandra xx
reply by Ulla on 10-Apr-2018
    Sandra, please don't worry about it. It can happen to all of us. Of course I recognised the mistake, hugs and smile. Yeah, I really like Rosie, and I hope we'll hear more from her. xx