Comment from Marisela Contona

Excellent

I love the poem, and the photo choice. This poem is very true, and deep. Your structure, format, and flow is great. I look forward to more.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Hi Marisela, glad you like the write; I appreciate your thoughtful comments my friend, thank you.

Comment from Roxanne Barbour

Good

Normally, haiku do not capitalize the first words of each line.
And, actually, I feel the first line would be better written as "uncommon courage".
I do like the image depicted in this haiku, but feel that so many words starting with the same letter spoil the image somewhat.
But this definitely reads as a haiku.
Keep up the good work.

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Hello Roxanne and welcome to FanStory; I appreciate your visit and the constructive review. For your information, this is not a haiku but a simple 5/7/5 contest entry, no other rules; the words starting with same letter is called 'alliteration' that is one of the beautiful tools we can use in writing. Again, thank you and welcome to the site.

reply by Roxanne Barbour on 08-Apr-2018

Thanks for pointing that out. I definitely am new to this site. :)

reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

You are welcome

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Courage, has the right format and encourages courage as the one asset that will come to the fore when all of our other tools fail. Paired with determination, we can fight on to victory.

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Hello Bill, glad you like the write; appreciate your stop and the wonderful review; thank you.