Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse describes the wee hummingbird very well.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018

Thanks Sharon.