Whirring
5-7-5 Poetry11 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Writer I think that the little hummingbird is such a beautiful colorful bird. And yes the little creature flutters and whirring its little wings as it goes from shrubbery to shrubbery. To me it seems as it should be tured with all of that whirring.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Writer I think that the little hummingbird is such a beautiful colorful bird. And yes the little creature flutters and whirring its little wings as it goes from shrubbery to shrubbery. To me it seems as it should be tured with all of that whirring.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the great review and comments. I am very fond of hummingbirds!!
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Yes they're beautiful creatures
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They're cute
Comment from Bill Schott
his 5-7-5, Whirring, has the correct format and captures the stationary hummingbird for a few seconds of description and appreciation. Nice.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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his 5-7-5, Whirring, has the correct format and captures the stationary hummingbird for a few seconds of description and appreciation. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much Bill!
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Nothing quite like the wonders of nature as this well written poem depicts with the hummingbird's flight. Well constructed poem. Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Nothing quite like the wonders of nature as this well written poem depicts with the hummingbird's flight. Well constructed poem. Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your time and review.
Comment from Cheryl Baker
I enjoyed reading Whirring" That glorious picture presents your poem beautifully. The word count is correct for the contest. A few well chosen words can say such a lot.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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I enjoyed reading Whirring" That glorious picture presents your poem beautifully. The word count is correct for the contest. A few well chosen words can say such a lot.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from jaded831
Great imagery, nature is a great theme, the picture compliments your poem. It flows nice and is true to form. I can not find anything negative to say, when it's right, it's right. Good luck in the contest, your poem added to my day.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Great imagery, nature is a great theme, the picture compliments your poem. It flows nice and is true to form. I can not find anything negative to say, when it's right, it's right. Good luck in the contest, your poem added to my day.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much. I appreciate it!!
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Nice entry for the 575 writing prompt competition. Great imagery and also good choice of words really just a great job. This poem painted a lovely picture.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Nice entry for the 575 writing prompt competition. Great imagery and also good choice of words really just a great job. This poem painted a lovely picture.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks Blue!! I am especially partial to colorful Hummingbirds. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a fantastic, charming and beautiful scene when the hummingbird in flight, spreads colours while whirring of wings; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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This speaks a fantastic, charming and beautiful scene when the hummingbird in flight, spreads colours while whirring of wings; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks for the lovely review!!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is a great description of hummingbirds. They are such incredibly beautiful birds. I remember the first time that I encountered one. I thought that they were some kind of beautiful bee until they just hovered. I was so intrigued by them. They make you want to watch them to see what they will do next. I enjoyed reading this poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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This is a great description of hummingbirds. They are such incredibly beautiful birds. I remember the first time that I encountered one. I thought that they were some kind of beautiful bee until they just hovered. I was so intrigued by them. They make you want to watch them to see what they will do next. I enjoyed reading this poem. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much. They are very lovely to me.... especially the iridescent ones. I appreciate the good review!!
Comment from tfawcus
What a wonderful sight those whirring wings and iridescent colours make. Truly one of nature's marvels and well worthy of a poem! Lovely picture to go with your words.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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What a wonderful sight those whirring wings and iridescent colours make. Truly one of nature's marvels and well worthy of a poem! Lovely picture to go with your words.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks for the great review. They are pretty aren?t they!!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork.
-Syllable count is good.
-Good use of color imagery.
-The alliteration in the last line
is very effective.
-The verb choice is also good.
-You let the reader hear and see
the hummingbird.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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-Very nice artwork.
-Syllable count is good.
-Good use of color imagery.
-The alliteration in the last line
is very effective.
-The verb choice is also good.
-You let the reader hear and see
the hummingbird.
-Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2018
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Thanks for the great review. I like how you gave comments on different aspects of the poem.
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You are very welcome.
