April NaPoWriMo NationalPoetcontest
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Autumn's April day"Daily poems for April 2018
15 total reviews
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
Hi, Christine--Excellent verse, and perfect graphic. You threw me, however. Here, in the States, we are struggling to get into spring. I forgot you were in Australia, and entering your autumn. Silly me! Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hi, Christine--Excellent verse, and perfect graphic. You threw me, however. Here, in the States, we are struggling to get into spring. I forgot you were in Australia, and entering your autumn. Silly me! Well done!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hi Susan, Thanks for reading my Autumn day poem and yes I find the same when you write about Spring I wish I love Spring and Summer although our Autumn has been exceptionally warm this year so I hope it continues Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about Autumn in April. We are in the same hemisphere and also experiencing the cooler Autumn weather and falling leaves.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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A very well-written poem about Autumn in April. We are in the same hemisphere and also experiencing the cooler Autumn weather and falling leaves.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hi Sandra, Than you for your review for my Autumn poem I am pleased you have Autumn where you are the leaves are lovely but messy LOL Enjoy out Autumn has been warm this year Yaa Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely written Christine. I noticed you got a three star review from a standard member who just joined on the sixth and the only review they've written is to you. Fishy business. You can block those fly bys by going into your advanced setting and click NO on accepting reviews from writers. Anyway let me know if you have trouble figuring it out. That was a bogus review and reviewer.
Super job with your NaPo entry.
Just one typo
Autums (Autumns) April day in the title
Excellent!
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Very nicely written Christine. I noticed you got a three star review from a standard member who just joined on the sixth and the only review they've written is to you. Fishy business. You can block those fly bys by going into your advanced setting and click NO on accepting reviews from writers. Anyway let me know if you have trouble figuring it out. That was a bogus review and reviewer.
Super job with your NaPo entry.
Just one typo
Autums (Autumns) April day in the title
Excellent!
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hi Gloria Thanks for your review and advice I was a bit taken back at this review and sent back a reply to ask for some critical analysis and also went to find who it was but they were not listed on the FS lists so when ai clicked on their user name up come nothing about them so who knows but I will be more wary next time and of course I certainly do not mind a low review but they need to advise or explain their reasoning. Thanks for your concern and have fixed that typo Cheers Christine
Comment from Artasylum
Hey sweetie:
Like autumn leave these words fall down
Then scatter on the page
But wither not, they will survive
And like this poem age.
This please me... every poet is a lottery of words sometimes winners and sometimes... pease leave the stage. I very much like your wonderful poem. yours, diana
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hey sweetie:
Like autumn leave these words fall down
Then scatter on the page
But wither not, they will survive
And like this poem age.
This please me... every poet is a lottery of words sometimes winners and sometimes... pease leave the stage. I very much like your wonderful poem. yours, diana
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hi Diane, Thanks for your review and I am pleased tou found my words wonderful I enjoyed writing this one and Autumn is here for us in Australia Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. This is so nicely composed and has good flow and rhyme. Image is gorgeous. I enjoyed reading this. I am a little behind, too, and trying to catch up. One tiny type: Add an (s)
"Like autumn leave(s) these words fall down
Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hi Christine. This is so nicely composed and has good flow and rhyme. Image is gorgeous. I enjoyed reading this. I am a little behind, too, and trying to catch up. One tiny type: Add an (s)
"Like autumn leave(s) these words fall down
Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hi Marilyn, Thanks so much and have fixed the typos I fell down on that one LOL still behind and worked hard today and now tired but will try to at least do some replies no poem tonight Cheers Christine
Comment from Joy Graham
You're in the opposite season from us. We're hoping for Spring while you're getting Autumn. I bet you don't get snow like we do? I think of April as a month of Spring. It catches me every time. I enjoyed your poem today.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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You're in the opposite season from us. We're hoping for Spring while you're getting Autumn. I bet you don't get snow like we do? I think of April as a month of Spring. It catches me every time. I enjoyed your poem today.
Joy xx
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2018
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Hi Joy, Yes I can see that it would be confusing as I find the seasons in other parts of the world confusing This Autumn has been very mild a few bleak days bit actually quite qpwarm still so I will make the best of it before winter we do get a little snow here in Victoria. Summer is my favourite Cheers Christinexx
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Hi Joy, Yes I can see that it would be confusing as I find the seasons in other parts of the world confusing This Autumn has been very mild a few bleak days bit actually quite qpwarm still so I will make the best of it before winter we do get a little snow here in Victoria. Summer is my favourite Cheers Christinexx
Comment from Bill Schott
This NAPOWRIMO poem, Autumns April Day, written in two-line iambic heptameter, seems to project the confusion we all have with April transitioning us into Fall again. Spring! Spring is what we want.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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This NAPOWRIMO poem, Autumns April Day, written in two-line iambic heptameter, seems to project the confusion we all have with April transitioning us into Fall again. Spring! Spring is what we want.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hi Bill, Yes I agree Spring Spring and then Summer. I don't like Winter cold much and much prefer the warmer weather I love to sunbake LOL Thanks for reading my poem and sorry for the late reply Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
What a refreshing picture. The poem was good to read, it had a comfortable reading flow and I liked the rhyme pattern. I liked the colors you described and they did remind me of autumn here although we should be going into spring lol but today we are having another snow storm, white everywhere. Thanks so much for sharing. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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What a refreshing picture. The poem was good to read, it had a comfortable reading flow and I liked the rhyme pattern. I liked the colors you described and they did remind me of autumn here although we should be going into spring lol but today we are having another snow storm, white everywhere. Thanks so much for sharing. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hi Ary, Thanks for reading my Autumn poem and Keep warm in the snow storm. We do get a bit of snow here in Ballarat but not lasting enough for the kids to have fun with Yes Autumn then Winter for us here Cheers Christine
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You are so welcome Christine, I do have to get my mind set that you are in Autumn going into winter whereas we are supposed to be in spring but still getting snow lol. But regardless there are many aspects of nature that provide beauty.
Comment from damommy
Very nice. It flowed so well, it was like falling leaves.
Isn't how strange how we can start writing, but then it takes on a will of its own and we never know what direction it will go.
good rhyme and meter. Loved the first stanza especially.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Very nice. It flowed so well, it was like falling leaves.
Isn't how strange how we can start writing, but then it takes on a will of its own and we never know what direction it will go.
good rhyme and meter. Loved the first stanza especially.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hi Yvonne, Thanks for your review and I never know what I will write until I start the first few lines and then just let it flow out Cheers Christine
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work highlights reminiscences of the autumn season and how, in a rather akin manner, it converges and reciprocates with the protagonist's propensity to write.
The work earns its texture through the use of oxymoron, simile, alliteration and assonance.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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The work highlights reminiscences of the autumn season and how, in a rather akin manner, it converges and reciprocates with the protagonist's propensity to write.
The work earns its texture through the use of oxymoron, simile, alliteration and assonance.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2018
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Hi Lloyd T, Many Thanks for your review and apologies for my late reply I am a little behind trying tro work and write every day and answering my messages so I hope you don't mind this delayed reply. I have set this task to write and post everyday, but working all day I am often to tired LOL however I value all my reviews and pleased others enjoy my work Cheers Christine
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Remain Blessed!
