A Wish For Our Survival
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Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Well Writer this is awesome I pray that we all survive. Because there are things in this world that were designed to take us out either physically mentally or through sickness but everyday we strive to survive and stay on this side of the Earth. And our faith is the catalyst that helps us survive. Thanks for sharing.
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Well Writer this is awesome I pray that we all survive. Because there are things in this world that were designed to take us out either physically mentally or through sickness but everyday we strive to survive and stay on this side of the Earth. And our faith is the catalyst that helps us survive. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
Comment from Judvan2
I like it, it made me laugh! Its a fun write that could and may be dead serious. Good entry for the contest. These little poems are challenging. Good luck to you. J
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I like it, it made me laugh! Its a fun write that could and may be dead serious. Good entry for the contest. These little poems are challenging. Good luck to you. J
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, A Wish For Our Survival, uses twenty-three syllables and four lines to wish Pretentsident Donald Trump a happy and quick trip into a realm where is ignorance can be more useful.
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This naani, A Wish For Our Survival, uses twenty-three syllables and four lines to wish Pretentsident Donald Trump a happy and quick trip into a realm where is ignorance can be more useful.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
Comment from kathleenspalding
Bwahahaha! Oh, I wish! And now I read your Author's note and laugh some more! Excellent Naani Poem and perfect choice of artwork and color. Well done!
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Bwahahaha! Oh, I wish! And now I read your Author's note and laugh some more! Excellent Naani Poem and perfect choice of artwork and color. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2018
Comment from Katya
Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha! Yes indeed, my wish too! And, I think, essential for our survival! Public "discourse" has become so much a matter of arousing fear, and public response so much a stampede for security at any cost, that it seems we have collectively lost touch with reality, each in our several ways. But there reality is, unmoved.
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Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha! Yes indeed, my wish too! And, I think, essential for our survival! Public "discourse" has become so much a matter of arousing fear, and public response so much a stampede for security at any cost, that it seems we have collectively lost touch with reality, each in our several ways. But there reality is, unmoved.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
Comment from Sherman541
I like what you say. Somewhere in another universe or world, there is another person and to wish them well in their universe is quite fitting and unique. Falling out of faith or stepping away is okay, so long as you don't stray to far. Faith gives us hope and leads us into the future. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
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I like what you say. Somewhere in another universe or world, there is another person and to wish them well in their universe is quite fitting and unique. Falling out of faith or stepping away is okay, so long as you don't stray to far. Faith gives us hope and leads us into the future. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
