Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a delicious use of words here. Your haiku form captures a feeling of 'reality". You did well with the haiku form in creating the image of reality. Excellent use of words.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks for your input I'm glad you enjoyed this haiku.
Blessings,
Brother Badger

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Man..,I've been travelling the web from true north to the south pole and could not find this word "teality" anywhere so if you can clarify, I'd appreciate it. he closest I came was treality which is urban slang for truth + reality.... Is this where you were
going? Also, Haiku are traditionally about nature.... I'm not a star cop so I give five for effort...but you've stretched the limits of form and content...

Karenina

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks, I have attitude and I like how you suck photos connecting truth let's reality but it was a genuine typo and I appreciate help with that and for the corn comments . Blessings,
Brother Badger

Comment from Cmelton

Excellent

I like the poem but I don;t know if you meant reality or teality. Maybe it is a play on words, but maybe it isn't. I think you have a small little poem here that works well with the words you chose. Good job and keep on writing.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks so much , yes it was a typo and I have such did you did it but thanks for much for getting the idea and for your warm Commons they are appreciated Blessings,
Brother Badger

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

I like the presentation of the short poem that has lots of imagery and the picture selection complimented the poem. The reader really like this poem.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2018

Thanks so much for your time to read and review, always a pleasure to meet other
r gifted writers here.
Blessings,
Brother Badger