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Final Words Contest Entry

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Comment from Alexander Vasa
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hahaahah I love it!!! So funny. You certainly do a great job of meeting the criteria in this poem. It is well written with no errors that I noticed. I do hope she got that mask on in time, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018

Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Final Words writing prompt.
Your short story is well told and has a funny ending.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018