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April NaPoWriMo NationalPoetcontest

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Brain in Overload"
Daily poems for April 2018

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This thirty-syllable poem, Brain in Overload, uses those limited syllables to acknowledge the mental olympics which keep the brain fit. Fun to write.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
    Hi Bill Thanks and yes olympics is the word Ha Ha I am a bit behind in this Contest and will have to make up for it . Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
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It looks like your brain is doing just fine Christine. It's even developed and mind of its own. I was going to count the syllables then ran out of fingers.

A most ingenious poem and good for nabbing two birds with one stone. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
    Hi Gloria, A bit of fun and this was not supposed to end up in my book I didnt add it as it was purely written for the writing prompt but somehow got added however it was a bit of fun and probably doesnt matter although I do want quality in my book and this is really not and there are far better 30 syllables poem in this contest Thanks for reading it anyway Cheers Christine 4 down 26 to go Ha ha
Comment from BeasPeas
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LOL. I like this. Very cleverly expressed short poem. It reflects the frustration of trying to do so much and we all fall behind. Love the image. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
    Hi Marilyn, thanks for this review and this was not meant to be put in my April listing I didn't add it so not sure how it is advertised as in I will contact Tom to see if I can have it removed form the list as it is meant to be in another contest. Anyway Cheers for your review and yes I am behind also Cheers
Comment from Eternal Muse
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I loved your picture! A real brain in overload (lol). Yes, this is a huge undertaking, writing 30 poems in a month (I can't do that), but to write one in 30 syllables is also a big task. Very witty and whimsical. Put a big smile on my face.

Good luck in both contests (smile).

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
    Hi yrbard. Thanks for reading this one and yes 30 for April will be challenging but this one was meant to just be in another contest not put ito my NaOWrMo folder so I must tey and get it out. It was a bit of a fun right for the 30 syllable contest bit I am glad you had a smile Cheers
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good poem for the 30 Syllables writing prompt.
Your story of writing 30 poems starting with this 30 syllables is good.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
    Hi Sharon, Thanks for your review and it was meant only for the writing prompt I did not add it to the book for the April contest however it was fun to make up these 30 syllables anyway. Cheerx
Comment from Sugarray77
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Well done on this entry for the 30 syllable prompt. Your meaning and theme are cute and an apt response to the 30 day challenge. Good job on this one and good luck too.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
    Hi Sugarray77. thanks tou for your review it wil ne quite a challenge to do 30 poems bit I am looking forward to it. This one hoever was pirely for the writing prompt only Cheers
Comment from meeshu
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definitely worth the try and have some fun with it.
writing about writing is a good start. good entry, here for the 30 syl.
best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
    Hi meeshu. Thank you for your support for my poem and for you good luck message we shall see LOL Cheers
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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Great use of humor to accompany this writing prompt. Very creative and clever! Makes this a good entry for the contest. Your 30 syllables were well chosen. Good luck!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
    Hi Cindy, A bit of fun being caught in the two contests . and I had fun with this prompt We shall see Cheers
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks poet is happy though brain is in overload to write a poem each day in this poetry month of April as he pleases to struggle writing; well said, well done. Wish good luck with the contest. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
    Hi DR ALCREATOR, Yes working very hard to keep on track And I thank you for giving this a read and review Cheers