Spring Rain
A peaceful, rainy day.19 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This thirty-syllable poem, Spring Rain, uses those limited syllables to remind us why we love spring time so much. The natural air fresheners make the staid and dull air worth breathing.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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This thirty-syllable poem, Spring Rain, uses those limited syllables to remind us why we love spring time so much. The natural air fresheners make the staid and dull air worth breathing.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the smell of spring rain. I really like the way you describe it. You say that it smells like perfume. I've never thought of it like that, but, that's an excellent analogy. I like this well written little poem. Well done Sugarray77.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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I love the smell of spring rain. I really like the way you describe it. You say that it smells like perfume. I've never thought of it like that, but, that's an excellent analogy. I like this well written little poem. Well done Sugarray77.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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Thanks. I really appreciate your comments and great review.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Sugarray, this is an excellent entry for the 30 syllables poem contest. All syllables are in check to allow the reader to feel in the moment of smelling fresh rain. Wonderful! ~DD
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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Sugarray, this is an excellent entry for the 30 syllables poem contest. All syllables are in check to allow the reader to feel in the moment of smelling fresh rain. Wonderful! ~DD
Comment Written 05-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments. :)
Comment from nartoonla
Now the rain isn't always applauded and often makes one feel gloomy. Important as rain is it can be at times most annoying. But when one sits and watches it as it falls, it can be relaxing and as you describe freshens the air and underlines how beautiful spring can be. A rare reflection if you ask me, but nice of you to thank the sky for the rain even though it pours for days at times...And to remind me as many it not there only for us to complain...
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Now the rain isn't always applauded and often makes one feel gloomy. Important as rain is it can be at times most annoying. But when one sits and watches it as it falls, it can be relaxing and as you describe freshens the air and underlines how beautiful spring can be. A rare reflection if you ask me, but nice of you to thank the sky for the rain even though it pours for days at times...And to remind me as many it not there only for us to complain...
Comment Written 04-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Thanks for the good review. I can see you have to deal with the gray skies. But, yes I?m grateful for every drop.
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It has been a wet long winter and seek the sunshine for now until the rain will once more be missed. The seasons are great but at times prolonged and one gets nostalgic for another... but rain and sunshine may create a grumbling face but both important for life to flow. Again an unusual piece and yet how the rain can be truly missed and again as you described it divine...bravo from me and the rain again. nartoon la
Comment from Eternal Muse
Nice imagery in this 30 syllable poem. Great visuals, and a very effective artwork to accentuate your words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, love, Y.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Nice imagery in this 30 syllable poem. Great visuals, and a very effective artwork to accentuate your words. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, love, Y.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a beautiful photo to accompany your poetry. And you did not waste one word in your poem. All 30 syllables were put to good use to explain your spring rain. It mingles all the human senses.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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What a beautiful photo to accompany your poetry. And you did not waste one word in your poem. All 30 syllables were put to good use to explain your spring rain. It mingles all the human senses.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for the great review!!
Comment from sunnilicious
Pretty presentation. Nice S-word alliteration flow. Strong visual imagery. Creative. Romantic. Good action words. Well thought out and clearly written. Nicely done. Great work.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Pretty presentation. Nice S-word alliteration flow. Strong visual imagery. Creative. Romantic. Good action words. Well thought out and clearly written. Nicely done. Great work.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thirty syllable poem about
spring rain that washes away all the dust and bring a freshness to the air. A welcome shower to wash the winter away.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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A very well-written thirty syllable poem about
spring rain that washes away all the dust and bring a freshness to the air. A welcome shower to wash the winter away.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Thanks so much! I love rainy days. I appreciate the review.
Comment from miajaffri
A spring rain is the best rain, especially in California, where winter rain can rain for days non-stop. Your poem has good images of raindrops gently falling on the windowsill and splashing into the room without alarm but with a quiet invitation. I can almost smell the sweet smell of the clean washed air, like a lovely perfume.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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A spring rain is the best rain, especially in California, where winter rain can rain for days non-stop. Your poem has good images of raindrops gently falling on the windowsill and splashing into the room without alarm but with a quiet invitation. I can almost smell the sweet smell of the clean washed air, like a lovely perfume.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from zanya
Not too often we decide to celebrate the fall of rain but here it is done with an artistic touch 'wafting a lovely perfume' and such an appropriate pic
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Not too often we decide to celebrate the fall of rain but here it is done with an artistic touch 'wafting a lovely perfume' and such an appropriate pic
Comment Written 02-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Thank you for your good review!!
