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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from judiverse
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Sam was a bit on the touchy side. It doesn't sound like a big deal for one snail to ask another to take his picture. Great fun with the pronunciation. Amazing picture. What a find. You are really on the snail trail. No telling where a snail will turn up. judi

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
    Bring out a camera and they flock in.
reply by judiverse on 03-Apr-2018
    There must be photographers who specialize in shooting snails. judi
Comment from Cass Carlton
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Yeah!! Bill, I wondered about that! Snails talking that is. But it's not only snails. It's shrews and jellyfish and other strange, slithery creatures too! You seem to have the gift of communication with denizens of the animal kingdom. Is this a plot to overthrow the governments of the world? Are you about to set yourself up as "the Grand PooBah" of The Wild? If you do I want IN. We'll talk later cheers Cass

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks, Cass, for giving this a look. Bill, Grand PooBah
Comment from nomi338
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How rude. Sam it seems, has a rather nasty attitude. A simple request was met with such rancor. Maybe the snail should have tried a selfie, then he at least woiuld not have gotten himself cussed out.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    No opposable thumbs.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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Hello, clever limerick type verse, and who would have guessed you talk to snails, and speak snail so beautifully. Your verse is very different, and I like the way you play with language. Nothing to fix here, Bill, and thanks for the poem, my first for the day, Ana.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks, Ana
Comment from Gloria ....
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Ha, what a fun Limerick, Bill. The dialect is something I can totally relate to although I must admit I've never been a snail farmer.

Excellent and great good fun. The pictures are cool too.

Gloria

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, not sure what sort of accent that was, but it was fun and you always make me smile Bill with your jelly fish, snails, whales, cockroaches etc, etc, ! He he he, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. So is that what an accent from Rotterdam sounds like? I'm guessing Sam is from the South. Looks like the snail did get his picture taken after all but by another camera.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    The shot was by someone named Google Images. He's from out of town.
Comment from damommy
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I'm not surprised they talk. He wanted his picture taken, but his friend refused.

How cute that he's looking right into the camera lens. A real close-up. lol

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    I actually was surprised they talk.
reply by damommy on 02-Apr-2018
    Do they have a lisp?
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    No, but some have an profound stutter.
reply by damommy on 02-Apr-2018
    LOL
Comment from tfawcus
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"Snop meh pictor, Som" Makes it sound as if this snail from Rotterdam has been on the Schnapps! A tourist from Scotland perhaps? A unique limerick to entertain us.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    He may be a nazi posing as a Scot dressed like a snail