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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the renewal of Spring that corresponds also with the reurrection of Jesus that means a new chance we have in life to find eternal life.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
    Thanks so much for the excellent review and your wonderful comments supporting this poem estory
Comment from Ulla
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Hi estory, yeah, March is the month of change even in a mild climate where I live. The almond trees have long since bloomed and now the mountainsides are ablaze with the cherry bloom. I liked your spiritual poem a lot. Very fit for the this celebration of Easter. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Thanks so much for the excellent review and for your wonderful comments supporting this poem. Glad you found it so resonant and that it spoke so well of spring, rebirth, and the resurrection. estory
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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Perfect timing to share this inspirational poem. It was a joy to read. "new stems come up from dead roots," was so a well-written line. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the excellent review and for your encouraging comments supporting the poem. I am glad you liked it and found a line or two so inspirational. This was written at a time when I was reconnecting with my faith, feeling absolved and forgiven for wandering off the path and renewed in spirit and hope by the Lord estory
Comment from meeshu
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a lovely springtime poem. full of the sense of rebirth.
a good time to go for a walk and see "new stems come up."
well crafted, simple.......meeshu

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the excellent review and for all your encouraging comments supporting the poem. I appreciate the time you took to give me such wonderful feedback. Always great when readers find something worthwhile in your poems. estory
Comment from tfawcus
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New stems coming up from dead roots - what a powerful image of resurrection and so appropriate both to the advent of Spring and to this season of Easter. Wishing you a blessed holiday season.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Thanks so much for the excellent review and for your wonderful comments supporting the poem. I am glad you found it so powerful and that the images resonated for you. Always great when you can make connections with readers. Happy Easter estory
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about Easter, Jesus is at work, His spirit renewing the world, life and death; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    He is risen indeed! Thanks so much for the wonderful review and comments supporting this piece. Glad you enjoyed it and found it so resonant. estory
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very nicely written poem about spring and the rebirth. I really enjoyed your words. These were my favorite stanzas! :
"I am the end and the beginning.
The bright, morning star!"

And look. New stems come up
From the dead roots,

Just like the water was turned into wine.
The days are getting longer than the nights.

Well done! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    He is risen indeed! Thanks so much for the excellent review and wonderful comments supporting the poem and letting me know there were so many lines in the poem that resonated for you. Glad you enjoyed it and found it so inspirational estory
Comment from Katya
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Oh, this is a wonderful Easter poem! I feel like it's the best I've seen yet! To me, it speaks of the rebirth of hope, and the keeping of the promise.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Thanks for the excellent review and for the wonderful comments supporting this poem. Glad you enjoyed it and found it so inspirational. He is risen indeed! Happy Easter estory
Comment from Artasylum
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Hey ESTORY... I did the very same thing I was here off and on since 2004-20012 and have just returned... needed to see if I could still put two sentences together. Enough about me... Love the poem is had many interpretations. All good. thanks yours, diana

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Thanks so much for the excellent review and you wonderful comments supporting the poem. Welcome back and I look forward to reading your work. I remember you. Glad you liked the poem so much estory
Comment from Gloria ....
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An excellent spiritual poem, estory. Good to see you back and posting.

You've written the personal meaning of the resurrection and your faith and it makes a lasting impression on your reader.

Many thanks for sharing. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018
    Thanks so much for the excellent review and for all your wonderful comments supporting this poem. Glad you found it so inspirational and that you liked it so much estory