Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Well I read it twice and the message I get was not much of a message at all. Good word flow and rhyming make it simple and yet funny. Thanks for writing this one and God bless always.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018

Thanks, GW, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Wow, what a catchy poem you've written. I liked the rhyming and the phrase 'deep-fried butterstick'. Ugh and yuk! I noticed you suggested we return to the top. Are you encouraging us to do loop reading and therefore, never finish reading your verse? Lol. You'll never get any reviews that way. Ha! Well done!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks, Sugarray

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Bill Schott... On days ending in Y clue number something... You mean his expired food the he eats expired food everydaY... he deserved to die. thanks so much. yours, diana

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

MondaY, TuesdaY, WednesdaY, ThursdaY, FridaY ...

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

I liked your fun poem about the jellyfish Fizelli. Very fun rhymes there, great humor and lots of little literary findings that may reading fun.

Enjoyed it very much.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks, YT

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

A well done verse and very clever. You've created your own version of a loop poem.
Another fun one, well written, well rhymed.
Thanks for sharing.
Sharon

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks, Sharon

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Bill, i enjoy you poems because they are so Random and often never make much sense ( with deep respect) but they are so funny I like your quirky brain and sense of fun. Keep them coming LOL Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

Thanks, Christine

Comment from F Scott Hafner

Excellent

You are all, that I may have wished to be. A marine, teacher, long marriage, kids, grandkids.I have some but you are among the best suited to be Prout. And I like your writing - Keep living a great life.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018

You are most kind, Frank.

Comment from Swampfox1

Excellent

Sooo, this is the never-ending poem of which I have heard that keeps one going back to the beginning in a continuous loop. Go back to the start and read again. It seems like the first stanza should have another line, something to rhyme with smelly. Notes are non-existent and I see none indicating what type of poem this should be or would be or might be, if we could see. the top says General Poetry but since when do generals do poetry. Hmm. The last line takes the purpose away for me. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018

What purpose?

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about a Jellyfish that likes to eat and never missed a meal. His last meal was a deepfried butterstick that stopped his heart and that was the end of the Jellyfish that likes to eat.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018

Thanks, Sandra

Comment from Harry Smith

Excellent

I did what the poem said to do and I went back and read again. I really enjoyed reading this poem that had lots of imagery and was well written. Hope you have a great Easter.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2018

Thank you, Harry. Happy Easter to you as well. Bill

reply by Harry Smith on 31-Mar-2018

You are welcome