Depression Is A Bully
When the bully calls4 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks clearly in rhymes sort of experience of daily struggle to live in depression like a bully, well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING -DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks clearly in rhymes sort of experience of daily struggle to live in depression like a bully, well worded, well done. KEEP WRITING, INSPIRE CHANGING -DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
Comment from meeshu
WOW so powerful! as a man touch by depression in many different ways I can relate saliently. you speak volumes with few words. what sets this apart from other work on this subject is there is no happy ending. no pep talk. change comes from inside each individual........great...mmeshu
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WOW so powerful! as a man touch by depression in many different ways I can relate saliently. you speak volumes with few words. what sets this apart from other work on this subject is there is no happy ending. no pep talk. change comes from inside each individual........great...mmeshu
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
Comment from Brenda Hammond
Depression is not a common subject for poetry, so kudos for your choice. You explained well the feelings involved in few words, also not easy to do. Your format and rhymes were very well done. Thank you and keep writing.
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Depression is not a common subject for poetry, so kudos for your choice. You explained well the feelings involved in few words, also not easy to do. Your format and rhymes were very well done. Thank you and keep writing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
Your angst and emotions are very evident and profound as you write your verse. You chose a good format to display this theme and it flowed well. Well done.
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Your angst and emotions are very evident and profound as you write your verse. You chose a good format to display this theme and it flowed well. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
