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Comment from judiverse
In the Shutterstock artwork, that looks like a human head atop the jellyfish. To each his own. As far as I'm concerned, I'd prefer to have no connection with jellyfish. If there are, he can keep them to himself. I realize that there is a connection between all creatures, but that doesn't mean I'd want a jellyfish attached to me. Interesting arrangement of words for your acrostic. judi
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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In the Shutterstock artwork, that looks like a human head atop the jellyfish. To each his own. As far as I'm concerned, I'd prefer to have no connection with jellyfish. If there are, he can keep them to himself. I realize that there is a connection between all creatures, but that doesn't mean I'd want a jellyfish attached to me. Interesting arrangement of words for your acrostic. judi
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, I already like this Jason, and I agree that all species are connected somewhere in the chain of evolution. An unusual and wonderful acrostic. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Hi Bill, I already like this Jason, and I agree that all species are connected somewhere in the chain of evolution. An unusual and wonderful acrostic. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 26-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from lyenochka
Jason Ectoplasm seems to be some kind of predecessor to human-like life forms? Or, are the "innumerable connections" a reference to common DNA between humans and jellyfish.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Jason Ectoplasm seems to be some kind of predecessor to human-like life forms? Or, are the "innumerable connections" a reference to common DNA between humans and jellyfish.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Let?s go with that.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hurray for Jason. I agree--we are all connected. He had a breakthrough that many people never get. You are going to town with your fun writes. This one is another unique formation with a great theme. Marilyn
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Hurray for Jason. I agree--we are all connected. He had a breakthrough that many people never get. You are going to town with your fun writes. This one is another unique formation with a great theme. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from nomi338
Yikes! What the hell? What ever the hell that things id, it had better stay far the hell away from me. If I should see Mr. Ectoplasm up close, I will kill his ghost because he would bring out the violent side of my nature. LOL.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Yikes! What the hell? What ever the hell that things id, it had better stay far the hell away from me. If I should see Mr. Ectoplasm up close, I will kill his ghost because he would bring out the violent side of my nature. LOL.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Stay out of th3 water, nomi.
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No problem.
Comment from damommy
I like this acrostic. Maybe if you had a different color for the first letters, it would be more noticeable.
So, is the jellyfish the beginning of us? They don't look very human-like. lol
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I like this acrostic. Maybe if you had a different color for the first letters, it would be more noticeable.
So, is the jellyfish the beginning of us? They don't look very human-like. lol
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This one came out with a vague meaning that I let stand and be interrupted.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I like the likeness to ectoplasm, very clever, do you mean 'innumerable' Bill? I don't know the word innumeramal, let me know, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I like the likeness to ectoplasm, very clever, do you mean 'innumerable' Bill? I don't know the word innumeramal, let me know, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Just testing you, Dolly.
Comment from robina1978
Pity you did not post a picture with this one. Possibly cause it is an Acrostic. He links his and our world together. Finds the connections, slowly revealing his humanity. Thanks for sharing this one.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Pity you did not post a picture with this one. Possibly cause it is an Acrostic. He links his and our world together. Finds the connections, slowly revealing his humanity. Thanks for sharing this one.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Ine
Comment from jmdg1954
Well, I do see the acrostic in the poem, but I have no understanding of it, other then it must in some way detail a jellyfishes existence.
John
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Well, I do see the acrostic in the poem, but I have no understanding of it, other then it must in some way detail a jellyfishes existence.
John
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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It is a metaphor for how many connections humans have with each other.
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, the jelly fish does connect to the sandy beach with many connections on its arms. It is a good metaphor for how many connections humans have with each other.
Keep wriing
Joan
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Yes, the jelly fish does connect to the sandy beach with many connections on its arms. It is a good metaphor for how many connections humans have with each other.
Keep wriing
Joan
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I sent your analysis to jmdg1954, Joan. You said it so well. Bill
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I am glad you liked my analysis, Bill.
Joan
