Seasons
Winter is late13 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your well rhymed verse tells a good story of winter lingering.
We've noticed a difference in weather patterns here as well. I think that it will keep getting stranger as the patterns keep changing.
Love the artwork as well.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Your well rhymed verse tells a good story of winter lingering.
We've noticed a difference in weather patterns here as well. I think that it will keep getting stranger as the patterns keep changing.
Love the artwork as well.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Sharon for your nice review and 5mstar rating
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Such beautiful imagery that you painted with your words in your poem about the season. I loved how you used the seasons of weather to explain the seasons of our moods. I think each of us does have that "wintery" cocoon blues from time to time. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Such beautiful imagery that you painted with your words in your poem about the season. I loved how you used the seasons of weather to explain the seasons of our moods. I think each of us does have that "wintery" cocoon blues from time to time. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Cindy for your lovely review and 5 star rating. I have never heard of the phrase Cocoon blues? Does it mean having the blues from being stuck inside?
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is a well written poem describing winter being late. You give the reader a message about how fickle the seasons seem to be. I like the wording and the superb way it flows. You've done a fine job in writing this. Well done Pam.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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This is a well written poem describing winter being late. You give the reader a message about how fickle the seasons seem to be. I like the wording and the superb way it flows. You've done a fine job in writing this. Well done Pam.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Jeffrey for your wonderful review and five star rating
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
The leaves speak with tongues that tell us of cold,
While other great tales of winter are told
The chilly fall leaves, now starting to molt
Are set to foment a wintry revolt ...beautiful lines. Exquisite and so meaningful for me since it is nearly April and in the North of the UK we are still being hammered by snow and biting cold winds. Scotland is even worse! Never a sunny day. It really affects my mood. Well done this makes me feel better. I am not alone. Plus it is so well written. Kindest regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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The leaves speak with tongues that tell us of cold,
While other great tales of winter are told
The chilly fall leaves, now starting to molt
Are set to foment a wintry revolt ...beautiful lines. Exquisite and so meaningful for me since it is nearly April and in the North of the UK we are still being hammered by snow and biting cold winds. Scotland is even worse! Never a sunny day. It really affects my mood. Well done this makes me feel better. I am not alone. Plus it is so well written. Kindest regards Meia xx
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Meia. I know that for the states an effect called the arctic blast that is making the northeast very cold and dumping a lot of snow. The reason why the arctic blast is more common now is due to global warming. The Arctic has melted so much ice that icebreakers are able to clear paths for ships. By 2050, it is predicted that in the summer there will be no snow or ice on the Arctic land mass. Thank you so much for your lovely teview and five star rating. I am glad it helped you feel better
Comment from Fabiha_N
This is a nicely written poem! You are right in saying that the different seasons do alter all of our moods. I find that winter has been the worst for me because it's almost April, and we are still getting some snow storms. Your words paint a clear image in my mind, and the metaphors you used added to the effect. Great work :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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This is a nicely written poem! You are right in saying that the different seasons do alter all of our moods. I find that winter has been the worst for me because it's almost April, and we are still getting some snow storms. Your words paint a clear image in my mind, and the metaphors you used added to the effect. Great work :)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Fabiha for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Great artwork and I love winter to be late as long as it does not linger into spring. I love the last two lines, very inventive, as seasons often affect our mood so this line resonates with me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Great artwork and I love winter to be late as long as it does not linger into spring. I love the last two lines, very inventive, as seasons often affect our mood so this line resonates with me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you again, Dolly for you know what. :-)
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your poem with its beautiful imagery
and descriptive language, great rhyming and strong
meter.
Fall and winter seem to me to be the moodiest seasons.
Nancy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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I enjoyed your poem with its beautiful imagery
and descriptive language, great rhyming and strong
meter.
Fall and winter seem to me to be the moodiest seasons.
Nancy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Agreed about fall and winter. Most people like the sun. But, summers are too hot and smothering for me. I prefer fall to summer. Thank you so much for your delightful review and five star rating
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
wonderful poem, perfect rhyme and meter. I see the news of your awful snow storms. In FL we barely have a winter. I wouldn't mind just a bit of arctic blast, just a tiny bit as I wouldn't want all that snow. No wonder FL is filling up and so much building. I don't blame anyone for wanting to get out to that. I do hope things warm up soon and you have a spring.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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wonderful poem, perfect rhyme and meter. I see the news of your awful snow storms. In FL we barely have a winter. I wouldn't mind just a bit of arctic blast, just a tiny bit as I wouldn't want all that snow. No wonder FL is filling up and so much building. I don't blame anyone for wanting to get out to that. I do hope things warm up soon and you have a spring.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Roxanna for your lovely review and five star rating. I do not live in the Northeast. I was using the spate of blizzards in the Northeast because the data is recent. I live in sunny California. But, I used to live in Indianapolis. Our next to last winter there, we had temperatures of -45f with wind chill. People going outside for a smoke or walking dogs died where they stood. Pouring water on the ground. It was ice before it hit the ground. The cause? Arctic Blast. Thank you. Take care
Comment from F Scott Hafner
I liked it - and I have never thought of seasons in that way. Here in Southern California the only seasons we have at salt, pepper, and oregano. But if we adopt your view, we can indeed have seasons - thank you.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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I liked it - and I have never thought of seasons in that way. Here in Southern California the only seasons we have at salt, pepper, and oregano. But if we adopt your view, we can indeed have seasons - thank you.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Frank for this wonder teview and five star rating. I laughed out loud at your joke about seasonings like salt and pepper. Cracked me uo
Comment from karenina
No more calls please we have a winner!
All I can say is I can't find words to describe yours...
Something rises from your soul with every write..
I am likely decades older than you....
But I want to be you when I grow up!
Karenina
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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No more calls please we have a winner!
All I can say is I can't find words to describe yours...
Something rises from your soul with every write..
I am likely decades older than you....
But I want to be you when I grow up!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, karenina for such a delightful review and five star rating. You mad me laugh. I am 65. How about you if you feel like answering. Thank you so much for the compliment
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I will be 65 December 4th! Tipped!
Karenina
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66 in November. I will be two years older then. Lol. I have a sister who is 22 months older and another who is 11 months older
