Attitude Adjustment Needed
2nd Place Winner: Diamante Contest Entry40 total reviews
Comment from TPAC
I'm still grasping this presented style, finding some pleasing aspects in those writes read by me. Interesting presentation of viewpoints that are captivating. All in my opinion.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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I'm still grasping this presented style, finding some pleasing aspects in those writes read by me. Interesting presentation of viewpoints that are captivating. All in my opinion.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hi Friend!
Give it a go.
It's a challenging format!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Comment from Fabiha_N
This is a well-written poem! It's a good fit for the dimante poem contest. Apathy is a strong word, and the words you used to describe it are really good. The antonym used fits in as well. Great work :)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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This is a well-written poem! It's a good fit for the dimante poem contest. Apathy is a strong word, and the words you used to describe it are really good. The antonym used fits in as well. Great work :)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend,
So pleased you appreciated my diamante.
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
Comment from William Ross
Great job on this and the transition between the two words. Nicely done on this. best of luck with this and have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Great job on this and the transition between the two words. Nicely done on this. best of luck with this and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hello William,
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review. These are a bit challenging to pen, but I enjoyed the challenge!
Thank you again!
Comment from pome lover
very good example of a diamante,
accompanied by a wonderful and apt quote.
You followed the requirement for each line well,
creating a meaningful, descriptive poem.
very nice.
good luck in the contest.
pome lover
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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very good example of a diamante,
accompanied by a wonderful and apt quote.
You followed the requirement for each line well,
creating a meaningful, descriptive poem.
very nice.
good luck in the contest.
pome lover
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Oh my goodness!
I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
So appreciated!
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most welcome
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this diamanté contest, it seems you've done a perfect job on this very worthy post. The antonym/synonym are perfectly scribed to fit the contest requirements, well dine, blessings, Rioy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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An excellent entry in this diamanté contest, it seems you've done a perfect job on this very worthy post. The antonym/synonym are perfectly scribed to fit the contest requirements, well dine, blessings, Rioy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hello Roy!
I so enjoyed penning this diamante.
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
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Most welcome
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Well done, I have no 6's left or I'd give you one. It seems a lot of thinking had to go into this, well it would for me. ={ For you a piece of cake I'm sure. I hope you do well in the contest. Roxanna
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Well done, I have no 6's left or I'd give you one. It seems a lot of thinking had to go into this, well it would for me. ={ For you a piece of cake I'm sure. I hope you do well in the contest. Roxanna
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hello Roxanna!
What a wonderful compliment!
Thank you for your excellent rating and best wishes.
I really enjoyed penning this diamante...
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image, quote, and presentation.
-You have followed all the rules.
-I like your two word choices.
-Your poem is written well with
good descriptions of the two word choices.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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-Good image, quote, and presentation.
-You have followed all the rules.
-I like your two word choices.
-Your poem is written well with
good descriptions of the two word choices.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hello Pam!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
I really enjoyed penning this piece, and I am pleased that you appreciated it...
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You are very welcome and I am glad you appreciated the comments. It was written well.
Comment from rspoet
This is a very good diamante poem and entry for the contest
with two solid antonyms in apathy and compassion.
Excellent choice of descriptive words for each
and a great picture quote from Jane Goodall to accompany the poem
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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This is a very good diamante poem and entry for the contest
with two solid antonyms in apathy and compassion.
Excellent choice of descriptive words for each
and a great picture quote from Jane Goodall to accompany the poem
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hello RS,
I am so pleased you appreciate my diamante.
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
So appreciated...
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written diamante poem. We are sometimes feeling apathy for all the things going on around us everyday and feel distant from what is going on while compassion. Is what we all need to give and receive.
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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A very well-written diamante poem. We are sometimes feeling apathy for all the things going on around us everyday and feel distant from what is going on while compassion. Is what we all need to give and receive.
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hello Sandra,
So pleased you enjoy my diamante.
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
So appreciated...
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Mystery Poet,
You did a great job with the diamante style. Your words are placed on correct lines in good form. Your progression from the first word to the last is great. Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Mystery Poet,
You did a great job with the diamante style. Your words are placed on correct lines in good form. Your progression from the first word to the last is great. Best wishes.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hello!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
I enjoyed penning this particular diamante.
Thank you, again.
