Love and Logic
Love makes a man crazy14 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
When love comes along, logic goes out the window! I know this is true because it happened to me... One look at my husband for the first time and I went crazy. It's a feeling I wouldn't change for the world. I loved this, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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When love comes along, logic goes out the window! I know this is true because it happened to me... One look at my husband for the first time and I went crazy. It's a feeling I wouldn't change for the world. I loved this, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Boogienights for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from ServantOfGod
Well, the phrase 'Love is blind' is something that I am sure most people have heard of at least once in their life. Your poem sure highlights that even more. I guess its kinda true that sometimes, when you fall hard in love, you don't even realise the things that you do.
Many thanks for sharing this poem.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Well, the phrase 'Love is blind' is something that I am sure most people have heard of at least once in their life. Your poem sure highlights that even more. I guess its kinda true that sometimes, when you fall hard in love, you don't even realise the things that you do.
Many thanks for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, ServantOfGod for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Yes Pam I can relate to those kind of days as a matter of fact I think that's the way I was about my husband but he just did not return the kind of love that I was giving him it took me a long time to come out of that Loop about 30 years. I'll say regardless of how he did I could not fall out of love with him but one day the light came on although a little late but it did anyway that's where the words for unending love the poem that I wrote got its foundation from thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Yes Pam I can relate to those kind of days as a matter of fact I think that's the way I was about my husband but he just did not return the kind of love that I was giving him it took me a long time to come out of that Loop about 30 years. I'll say regardless of how he did I could not fall out of love with him but one day the light came on although a little late but it did anyway that's where the words for unending love the poem that I wrote got its foundation from thank you for sharing
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Mary for your heartfelt review and five star rating. I am sorry to heR about the 30 years, but then a new life begins. That is kind of exciting having that freedom. Take care
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem writing prompt.
Your well rhymed verse tells of a man smitten.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem writing prompt.
Your well rhymed verse tells of a man smitten.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much, Sharon for this nice review and five star rating
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. That's so true that hormones can make that love so crazy. I was struck by the first line: "The love that is tidy can never exist " and it ends a bit forebodingly that he now has to "pay the price."Great rhyming and meter throughout.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Lol. That's so true that hormones can make that love so crazy. I was struck by the first line: "The love that is tidy can never exist " and it ends a bit forebodingly that he now has to "pay the price."Great rhyming and meter throughout.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you, lyenochka for your lovely review and five stat rating. So, you vote no, then. That love like that does not allow for logic
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the message of this. The kind of love that the reader is experiencing here to me is suffocating and all consuming. This man can't think, breathe, or function. This was enjoyable to read. You've done an awesome job with this. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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I love the message of this. The kind of love that the reader is experiencing here to me is suffocating and all consuming. This man can't think, breathe, or function. This was enjoyable to read. You've done an awesome job with this. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Jeffrey for your wonderful teview and five star rating
Comment from rhonnie69
Hello PAMUSART: I pondered for quite a while, how I'd interpret your charming style: She makes him so crazy, his mind's in a vice. The rest of his life is now paying the price. My interpretation: He chose to dance to her music. So...He'll have to pay to the piper. (HER).
His thrill-bill from Jill he can never full-fill. It's sort of like an...uh...everlasting, I.O. SUE.
His moral: "It's cheaper to keep her."Wife for life." She's schooled him well. (ME) And I love her. rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Hello PAMUSART: I pondered for quite a while, how I'd interpret your charming style: She makes him so crazy, his mind's in a vice. The rest of his life is now paying the price. My interpretation: He chose to dance to her music. So...He'll have to pay to the piper. (HER).
His thrill-bill from Jill he can never full-fill. It's sort of like an...uh...everlasting, I.O. SUE.
His moral: "It's cheaper to keep her."Wife for life." She's schooled him well. (ME) And I love her. rhonnie69.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Ithank you, rhombie69 for your insightful review and five star rating. Yes he lets himself go at the beginning
Comment from cailinraine8
I don't think there is a lot of logic in brand new exciting love... that first rush needs to mature into something concrete and solid and reality sets in to remind us that nothing is utopia and everything will take work. This is a well written poem about that first "rush" of love which excites us and puts us on a "roll"... good work!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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I don't think there is a lot of logic in brand new exciting love... that first rush needs to mature into something concrete and solid and reality sets in to remind us that nothing is utopia and everything will take work. This is a well written poem about that first "rush" of love which excites us and puts us on a "roll"... good work!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you, cailinraine8 for your lovely review and five star rating. So far it is 2-1. You and I agree that passionate romance.dies not allow for logic. I am going to tally after all of the reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear Pam, he paid the price for an infatuation! What a shame. Your poem is well rhymed and whirl wind romances sometimes end in disaster, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Oh dear Pam, he paid the price for an infatuation! What a shame. Your poem is well rhymed and whirl wind romances sometimes end in disaster, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Dolly for your nice review and five star rating. He is letting himself go because he is so crazy in love. It will end once the passion is put on simmer
Comment from royowen
I can remember years ago I had quite a few girlrofriend's over a period of a few years, there was no logic to any of them. Nicely written, nice even in 11 11 11 11 couplet rhyming, well done, Pamela, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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I can remember years ago I had quite a few girlrofriend's over a period of a few years, there was no logic to any of them. Nicely written, nice even in 11 11 11 11 couplet rhyming, well done, Pamela, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018
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I am doing a lot of rewriting, Roy, trying to make them perfect. You know why. Thank you. It is because of you that I am trying to make each line the same number of syllables with the same cadence relatively for each line and then rhyme it too. Not easy. A labor of love. Thank you for this review and five star rating. So far, it is 4-1 votes saying there can be no logic at a time like that
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It gets easier with time, Pamela, some forms are easier than others, you'll get there, well done,
