Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a really cute poem you have penned about the fish inside the jellyfish. You used very cute words and really great imagery with the art work. I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

This is another neat poem, but I'm afraid something went wrong with the program-the image is so large it does not fit on the page. I can't see the entire picture, although, from what I can see, it makes me glad I'm not a jellyfish! :)

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018

Thanks, Brenda. Yes, it was a bad choice for size, but perfect for the theme.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 26-Mar-2018

Right you are! I hadn't realized that.

Comment from strandregs

Excellent

Love the word play Bill
Forgive me for being a nonk
But, why directing and not consuming
and why not
looks just like a wish list dish
to enhance the word play further.

Fish inside a jellyfish

looks just like a wish list dish

flounder thinks he's doing well

Consuming this freeloading gel

until a shark goes swish swish by

and eats this jellyfish-fish pie

with respect. :-))Z.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Yout query stems from your unfamiararity with this photo action. Neither is eating. The fish is protected by the jellyfish which is being propelled anddirected by the fish.

reply by strandregs on 23-Mar-2018

I guess we're talking Nimo as in the movie.
my apologies. with a smile and a good shabes.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for adding the dramatic pictures and coming up with the clever idea of the "jellyfish pie". I also enjoyed your rhymed couplets. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Thanks, Joan

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

This looks like a case where hiding in plain sight did not work so well. Maybe next time, wait, being eaten by a shark means that for him there will not be a next time. Oh well, never mind.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Just when you think you've got life figured out.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Your sense of humor is too clever. Great word combinations with "ish" sounds and rhyming in this fun composition. Love the images. An enjoyable read. Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Thanks, Marilyn

Comment from Cass Carlton

Excellent

Yes, there are no table manner niceties in the ocean. It's eat and be eaten in turn.
I remember catching a squid once and found its last meal still within it. The poem is short and to the point. It speaks of the chain of life in the sea. Little things are eaten by bigger things which are eaten in their turn. The shark is at the head of the food chain as a top predator, but even it is caught and eaten by Man. Ever hungry omnivorous Man. Cheers Cass

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

THANKS, Cass, for the neat review. Bill

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! I recognize that fish in a jellyfish! Poor "flounder" thought he was safe until the shark got him. True in life, too, when we think we thought of all the possible threats and start to feel safe...!

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Wow that was really an interesting picture!. I guess it was a pretty interesting dinner also according to the shark anyway. Excellent poem, original and entertaining.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, FB, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh my goodness, the lady who swallowed a fly comes immediately to mind! It's a dog eat dog world out there isn't it! Your poem made me smile and I'm so glad I am not a fish! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, Dolly, For giving this a look. Bill