Comment from Nancy Tremblay

Excellent

I love how this poem put a picture into my mind as read it. I thought is was very descriptive and I liked how it made me remember things I had not thought of in years. I loved the nose of a baby bunny.

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018

Thank you for your kind comments and stars. I appreciate them both.

reply by Nancy Tremblay on 27-Mar-2018

You wrote a lovely poem, I enjoyed it!

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Good

This is delightful. I love the imagery. This poem has the playfulness of the work by Dr. Seuss. I could envision this in a colorful picture book. It will appeal to all audiences. Nice work with alliteration which creates an air of lightness.
And people reading this might hope the adventures in your poem happen to them.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2018

Thanks, Liz. I'll double check those lines. I appreciate both the comments and the stars!

Comment from Fabiha_N

Excellent

This is a nicely written poem! It's definitely a nonsense poem, and it's also paints funny pictures in my mind, but I think this is something that can definitely appeal to a child. A child's imagination can stratch so far, without a real end! Great work :)

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Thanks for your comments and stars. I appreciate it.

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, this is a good poem, and a great entry for the nonsense poem. I enjoyed it and I imagine it would have wide appeal, for both adults and children. Good publishing choices and nice rhyming. Thaks for sharing your verse, Ana.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018

Thanks for your comments and stars. I appreciate it.