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Chapter 1: A New Direction

I move into Dusty West's home

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Comment from BeasPeas
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Although I had read some of your story previously, Brett, this is excellent as you describe it again for the reader. Your writing is detailed and interesting. Nice job. Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this portion. Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Comment from Ulla
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It's a lovely story Brett, and one I can so relate to. I spent the first two and a half years of my life in an orphanage.
I remember reading your former posts, and I was fascinated. I'm looking forward to reading along. That piano remains one of most prized possessions. = ... one of my most ...
All the best, Ulla:))

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2018


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    Thanks. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Sankey
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We have the movie of "Old Yeller" and I do relate to the era you speak of TV-wise, I have all the MASH series, I make my wife suffer every few years and go through them again. I don't mind Frank Burns and Henry Blake, but Louise prefers from Colonel Potter onwards.I forget your vintage I think we might be a similar age. Michael Cahill is a year older than me. This was a great chapter and I am thrilled this story...your story...has returned. Tom said I have a year left on FS.

Suggestion for following...That is one thing time can never [mar](erase or wipe away).

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    Glad you enjoyed this portion. Appreciate you reading it and the review.
reply by Sankey on 23-Mar-2018
    Last Chapter of Little Dog biography went up this morning.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Yes, I do believe this will be interesting Brett. What a wonderful person Dusty must have been to take in a young boy off the street and give him a home. You were cast into a world of music how great was that? Country western even, my favorite. Looking forward to more. Nancy

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    Glad you enjoyed this first portion. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Wetbelly01
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I thank you for sharing this piece...
It's very interesting to me, as well as informative...
And yeah, I heard and watched all of those names you dropped...
Didn't come across any problems...
Looking forward to reading more!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    Thanks.
Comment from Pamusart
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I like any post with a dog. Somehow, when a dog is in the story, he is usually a prominent character. Otherwise, why would he be in the story. He is the star of your story. Well written. Easy to read. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    Thanks. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from royowen
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I think most of us who were around at the time your biography was set, would remember those well known country music characters that you mention. Getting to know a dog and your close confidante who thinks you are his pup, sounds familiar. We've owned similar animals. I like the way you recall these days, looking through a very interesting lens. Well done Brett, and attractive style and way of looking at the world. Good job, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    Thanks. Always appreciate your comments and reviews.
reply by royowen on 23-Mar-2018
    Most welcome
Comment from Rasmine
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Brett, :)

I'm sorry about the strife you had; I've had a bad one too as a child. I had a dream about some dolls I had and woke up wishing I still had them. They are only material possessions, though. I needed to read one of your lines:
I still have my memories of those days though.That is one thing time can never mar (Thank you for writing this, I needed to hear it!).

I found a typo:
In this portion of my Bio, I will detail the true events of how I was adopted by an unknown stranger (I think you want 'as' here) I begged money from in a Wal-Mart parking lot.

You take care!
Nome

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
    Thanks. Always appreciate your comments and reviews.