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If you feel

Just get up and walk away

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Comment from l.raven
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HI Waves, I know the song you are hearing...and lots of your poems would make good songs...I know when the love is gone...better not suffer and hang on...hard part is...walking away...love is such a strong emotion...very well written you...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much Linda I am glad you can hear the tune

    xxdip
reply by l.raven on 24-Mar-2018
    soooooooo welcome you...love xxoo
Comment from Pantygynt
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I like the way you use the words in this one Dip. The kind of weave all round and in and out, particularly in the last two stanzas which i thought worked very well indeed. Glad to here this is not autobiographical but then I never thought it was.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    thanks as always for taking the time to review Jimmity much appreciated as always.

    dip
Comment from RGstar
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Yes, dip...another question that almost seem to be posed by the hurting partner, who is at odds with knowing.
Straight to the point, with much dignity.
Good write.
My best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much Roy much appreciated as always

    dip
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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Hi Dip,
Ah! Romance.
I agree either let it be or let it go don't just leave me hanging on.
I believe love is like a melody but not everyone hears the same tune so maybe this one can find a fitting tune.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much Shirley much appreciated

    dip
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Well Dip, it hits point because there are so many who are not over it as they might possibly wish to be. Pain in this arena is hard to overcome or get over. Great thoughtful write in this one. xoxo d

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    Thank you again Deb I don't come here everyday anymore Just don't have the time

    dip
Comment from Pamusart
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Looks like I am the first to review this one. It is easy to read and rhymes well the message is clear. I think that people sometimes do not really want to break up. But, they keep sending up flares and seeing the response. If someone really wants to break up, he or she will leave and not leave the other partner hanging. Thank you fir sharing. My poems are in the form of song lyrics. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    Thank you as always Pam I will go have a read

    dip
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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Hello Dip, another lovely verse. Very practical advice, but it's also quite romantic, and you can see the poet has a genuine heart that asks the same of himself as he does of others. I saw no errors, and my only suggestion for improvement would be to remove the word 'perfectly', but having said that, I am not a poet that knows a great deal about the meter, or syllable counts. I just don't write that way.

I enjoyed your poem, and thanks for sharing it, Ana.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much Anastasia much appreciated.

    dip