Planet of Crystal
Someone builds a planet of crystal9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Wow old lady you go deep inside of yourself with your writings Expressed on paper but I love it. Its just amazing the different thoughts and thought images that creates a workd of its own in our minds. But then to put it on paper for others to see sometimes others get it and sometime they don't was really doesn't matter as long as you know what you're talkin about that's how I feel when I have something going on in my psyche that I want to share. That's where creativity comes from and Pam you have a superb volume and Treasure of creativity and I love it, although I may not understand all of it but the way you put it on paper makes it so and worth the reading.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Wow old lady you go deep inside of yourself with your writings Expressed on paper but I love it. Its just amazing the different thoughts and thought images that creates a workd of its own in our minds. But then to put it on paper for others to see sometimes others get it and sometime they don't was really doesn't matter as long as you know what you're talkin about that's how I feel when I have something going on in my psyche that I want to share. That's where creativity comes from and Pam you have a superb volume and Treasure of creativity and I love it, although I may not understand all of it but the way you put it on paper makes it so and worth the reading.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Mary for your lovely review and five star rating the planet of crystal here is your soul. As you die memories and highlights of your life come flooding through. They are stored in the soul before you die.
Comment from karenina
A phantasmagoric poem of wishes and hopes....a way out, as it were, of the inevitable death we all will face. When we are in pain such travel to a crystal
planet would seem like a spectacular escape! Really cool artwork you chose...
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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A phantasmagoric poem of wishes and hopes....a way out, as it were, of the inevitable death we all will face. When we are in pain such travel to a crystal
planet would seem like a spectacular escape! Really cool artwork you chose...
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Karenina for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from royowen
A nicely composed poem Pamela, in general in pentametric stanzas in articulately smooth in its writing, deftly crafted and produced, a particularly attractive work, in aabb couplet rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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A nicely composed poem Pamela, in general in pentametric stanzas in articulately smooth in its writing, deftly crafted and produced, a particularly attractive work, in aabb couplet rhyming, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Roy for your insightful review and five star rating.
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Most welcome Pamela
Comment from Wetbelly01
So much said in so few words...
Your poem has a fine flow and rhyme to it...
With a pretty strong message to it...
And no problems along the way...
My compliments!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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So much said in so few words...
Your poem has a fine flow and rhyme to it...
With a pretty strong message to it...
And no problems along the way...
My compliments!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Wetbelly01 for your wonderful review and five star rating
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You're most welcome!
Comment from mvbrooks
Interesting analogy of the frailing human body and the hope for, perhaps eternity, in a crystal planet. There's a sense of hope, of an undying spirit, in the words describing the "long lost vase" with "fresh flower blooms." If the vase is long lost--who added the fresh blooms? It seems to be from the narrator's indestructible spirit. The poem ends with a sense of hope.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Interesting analogy of the frailing human body and the hope for, perhaps eternity, in a crystal planet. There's a sense of hope, of an undying spirit, in the words describing the "long lost vase" with "fresh flower blooms." If the vase is long lost--who added the fresh blooms? It seems to be from the narrator's indestructible spirit. The poem ends with a sense of hope.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Yes, the vase and flowers come from the past. It and all of the narrator?s old dreams fill up the planet (soul) before death. Thank you for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An inventive write and if aliens land on our planet we might even learn that they are like us, maybe, just maybe we will finally unite in the battle against them? Your well rhymed little poem is food for thought, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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An inventive write and if aliens land on our planet we might even learn that they are like us, maybe, just maybe we will finally unite in the battle against them? Your well rhymed little poem is food for thought, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Dolly for your nice review and five star rating
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought-provoking poem. We build our souls to become strong and meanibgful with spiritual food to make it ready to leave our body when we die.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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A very well-written thought-provoking poem. We build our souls to become strong and meanibgful with spiritual food to make it ready to leave our body when we die.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Sandra for your thought gum review and five star rating
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work reminisces a symbolism of the imperative of having oneself protected from exogenous incursions.
The work highlights the protagonist's strive in this direction and how it gave her soul succour from perceived threats.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphor, imagery and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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The work reminisces a symbolism of the imperative of having oneself protected from exogenous incursions.
The work highlights the protagonist's strive in this direction and how it gave her soul succour from perceived threats.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphor, imagery and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Lloyd for your insightful review and five star rating
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, you write so effortlessly, perfect rhythm, and rhyming. I also think the topic is handled poetically, with such a deep message. Our spirits are far more fragile than crystal, and we should be careful of ourselves and others.
I have no suggestion for improvement, and the artwork is great. Thanks for sharing another of your poems, Ana.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Hello, you write so effortlessly, perfect rhythm, and rhyming. I also think the topic is handled poetically, with such a deep message. Our spirits are far more fragile than crystal, and we should be careful of ourselves and others.
I have no suggestion for improvement, and the artwork is great. Thanks for sharing another of your poems, Ana.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Ana so very much for your lovely teview and five star rating
