Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, those houses in Ireland do look like something out of Peter the Rabbit. I liked your non-fiction prose. It read really well, and was engaging, your good descriptive writing holding my interest. You also pepper it with humor and that is a great aspect of the story.

My only suggestion for improvement would be to insert paragraph breaks, as it makes it easier on the reader. You might find some will shy away from a great wad of text, and that would be a shame as it is such a good and personal story.

Thanks for sharing it, Ana.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018

Thanks :) . I thought the breaks were in there, thanks for pointing them out and will add the page breaks.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

An enjoyable narrative of your honeymoon trip to Ireland. Your descriptions of beauty and local interaction were a delight to read. Thanks for sharing it with us. ;)

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018

Thank you :)