Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

You have written a lovely, flowing poem that just ebbs and flows like waves. I enjoyed reading this verse. You have done a good job with the cadence that invites the reader to experience the movement of waves. Well done.

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Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Beautifully done. The picture appealed to me very much as a resident of Myrtle Beach (smile). Loved your rhyming, cadence, and the imagery of the whole thing. A touching love poem, thank you so much for sharing it with us.

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Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Your well written and well rhymed verse tells a lovely story of a past or future love.
The beautiful picture is a good match as well.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon

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