Comment from William Ross

Excellent

yes we all heave to believe in ourselves, I am the most important to have to believe in me. Nicely done. I like how it reads. have a great day

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020

Thank you.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

And the bird of paradise in your picture is the flower of Tenerife! How wonderful. A flower rising from the ashes of a volcano like a phoenix! I loved your words Victor, we should be proud of ourselves and learn to be who we are, there is no need for change, wise words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020

Thank you, Dolly.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

We all make mistakes. It is how we move forward that makes a difference. I enjoyed your poem. You are right--believe in yourself. Thanks for sharing & caring. Best wishes. Jan

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020

Thank you, Jan.

Comment from estory

Excellent

I like the tight format, the tight meter, the tightly woven rhyme scheme. And this poem speaks with a determined voice of fighting through adversity of shame, of despair, and finding resurrection, and hope, in life. Carrying on in the hope of life. estory

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020

Thank you, my friend.