Just to Be
you know what life does64 total reviews
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I am coming
I am Coming
With
Or
Without help
I will be...
once again
Believe in yourself ...sublime wisdom! well done regards meia xx
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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I am coming
I am Coming
With
Or
Without help
I will be...
once again
Believe in yourself ...sublime wisdom! well done regards meia xx
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Meia.
Comment from ameen786
Damn straight it is; a profound and inspiring reflection with a valuable theme, "I will be...once again,"-sums it up; thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Damn straight it is; a profound and inspiring reflection with a valuable theme, "I will be...once again,"-sums it up; thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you. Truly. Doug
Comment from cailinraine8
We are enough just the way we are, the way we are born, and with belief in ourselves we can "rise" and be whatever we have chosen within our sensible abilities and sometimes we can even surpass that with the right mentors and opportunities. This is beautifully illustrated and written uniquely and well.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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We are enough just the way we are, the way we are born, and with belief in ourselves we can "rise" and be whatever we have chosen within our sensible abilities and sometimes we can even surpass that with the right mentors and opportunities. This is beautifully illustrated and written uniquely and well.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from ServantOfGod
A truly well-written poem, meant to inspire ourselves to rise up, amidst our failures. Where others lost faith in us, only we can truly believe in ourselves, and rise up from there.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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A truly well-written poem, meant to inspire ourselves to rise up, amidst our failures. Where others lost faith in us, only we can truly believe in ourselves, and rise up from there.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Yes, I think so.
But how we believe in ourselves,
how we come to believe,
is for the ages.
Comment from TPAC
An interesting way to release feelings, thrown darts striking its target with impact, sentiment depositing the good, bad and ugly aspects. I found it a delighting journey with adventurous twists along read course.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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An interesting way to release feelings, thrown darts striking its target with impact, sentiment depositing the good, bad and ugly aspects. I found it a delighting journey with adventurous twists along read course.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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I think, you have totally got it.
Comment from MissMerri
I like this very much and can readily identify with the theme. It is great to have moments of rising from the ashes of what seemed a wreck, and soaring like the Phoenix into hitherto unknown heights. Good writing, and good philosophy too. I liked everything about this.
reply by MissMerri on 23-Mar-2018
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I like this very much and can readily identify with the theme. It is great to have moments of rising from the ashes of what seemed a wreck, and soaring like the Phoenix into hitherto unknown heights. Good writing, and good philosophy too. I liked everything about this.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by MissMerri on 23-Mar-2018
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You must have wondered why, when I said I liked everything about this, I would then give it four stars. I think sometimes the stars bounce from five to four. I never meant this poem to have less than five. I am glad I noticed... and apologize for the inadvertent mistake.
Comment from tony bronk
Okay! I will believe in myself if you wish! An interesting pom with an interesting form to make a point of being you!Excellent well written poem! Tony
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Okay! I will believe in myself if you wish! An interesting pom with an interesting form to make a point of being you!Excellent well written poem! Tony
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Tony.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem telling the reader we should be ourselves. If we lost ourselves over time it is best to search who we are until we found the person we lost before life happened to us.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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A very well-written poem telling the reader we should be ourselves. If we lost ourselves over time it is best to search who we are until we found the person we lost before life happened to us.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Yes, that is correct.
Comment from royowen
Hope is the very dream that keeps us alive, it doesn't matter what that vision is, but it must be that spark that pushes through and on to get us through each day, it's what gets us up in the morning to face the day. "We may weep in the night, but hope cometh in the morning" well done, good scribing, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Hope is the very dream that keeps us alive, it doesn't matter what that vision is, but it must be that spark that pushes through and on to get us through each day, it's what gets us up in the morning to face the day. "We may weep in the night, but hope cometh in the morning" well done, good scribing, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Roy.
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Bless you
Comment from Sugarray77
Great originality in the presentation and theme. I especially like how the bird of paradise flower is vibrant while the rest of the others are subdued. Yes, for individualism! Well done on this poem. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Great originality in the presentation and theme. I especially like how the bird of paradise flower is vibrant while the rest of the others are subdued. Yes, for individualism! Well done on this poem. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
