Just to Be
you know what life does64 total reviews
Comment from karenina
A poem of redemption and renewal...soft reflection of who you were and are and continue to become! I found it hopeful. It is never too late to gather up our pieces and reinvent the whole
Karenina
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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A poem of redemption and renewal...soft reflection of who you were and are and continue to become! I found it hopeful. It is never too late to gather up our pieces and reinvent the whole
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you, my dear.
Comment from Poetofheart2013
I really love your poem it so beautiful poem.
full of good feeling and emotions and flows really good.
Enjoyed reading it keep the good work.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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I really love your poem it so beautiful poem.
full of good feeling and emotions and flows really good.
Enjoyed reading it keep the good work.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Janilou
A very interesting piece indeed. The closing line says it all. We need to believe in ourselves.
Loved these lines:
Resurrection
The Phoenix flies again
Certainly didn't find anything to suggest for edits or corrections.
All the best.
Jan
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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A very interesting piece indeed. The closing line says it all. We need to believe in ourselves.
Loved these lines:
Resurrection
The Phoenix flies again
Certainly didn't find anything to suggest for edits or corrections.
All the best.
Jan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Jan.
Comment from ScarletAffliction
But now,
I have found
the me before
The me before...great words. I liked your poem and its simple format. It was easy to get to the meat of the matter. Way to go. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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But now,
I have found
the me before
The me before...great words. I liked your poem and its simple format. It was easy to get to the meat of the matter. Way to go. Nicely written.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Artasylum
Believe in yourself the rest will follow. This moment, this prayer, this thesis of spirit is lovely. thanks so much for this interesting slice of life and your point of view.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Believe in yourself the rest will follow. This moment, this prayer, this thesis of spirit is lovely. thanks so much for this interesting slice of life and your point of view.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your beautiful verse is nicely matched by the lovely picture of the Bird of Paradise.
Well written, well said. We should all believe in ourselves and accept who we are, the good and the bad. Sometimes those are equally hard to admit.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Your beautiful verse is nicely matched by the lovely picture of the Bird of Paradise.
Well written, well said. We should all believe in ourselves and accept who we are, the good and the bad. Sometimes those are equally hard to admit.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Sharon.
Comment from Zue65
I just love the short, concise words with which the author describes the emotion in this poem. Sometimes big words can suffocate the message. Brief words or phrases in their simplicity speak more and mean more, as what you did here. Very well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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I just love the short, concise words with which the author describes the emotion in this poem. Sometimes big words can suffocate the message. Brief words or phrases in their simplicity speak more and mean more, as what you did here. Very well done.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from MelB
Hello VictorTouche, very nice artwork and an interesting free verse poem about going through many things in life, but learning to believe in yourself.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Hello VictorTouche, very nice artwork and an interesting free verse poem about going through many things in life, but learning to believe in yourself.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Mel.
Comment from Gloria ....
Such a great U2 tune. They have written some wonderful music and lyrics over a lifetime. This is most uplifting Victor and it's exactly the kind of inspiration we all need.
Great job and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Such a great U2 tune. They have written some wonderful music and lyrics over a lifetime. This is most uplifting Victor and it's exactly the kind of inspiration we all need.
Great job and many thanks for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Gloria.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Victor!
Your well-crafted free verse poem speaks volumes. You've made mistakes. You've been to hell. And now:
With
Or
Without help
I will be...
once again
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I sense hope when you end your poem with "Believe in yourself"
That's so important.
Sometimes, it's the only person in your corner...
Keep believing!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Hello Victor!
Your well-crafted free verse poem speaks volumes. You've made mistakes. You've been to hell. And now:
With
Or
Without help
I will be...
once again
~~~~
I sense hope when you end your poem with "Believe in yourself"
That's so important.
Sometimes, it's the only person in your corner...
Keep believing!
diane
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2020
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Damn straight, woman.
You're a good soul.
Doug
