Just to Be
you know what life does64 total reviews
Comment from Tootie
Wow! I really liked this. First poem I read by you here and it's really good. I like what you are sharing in it. Simple poem but very deep. Thank you for this. Blessings!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Wow! I really liked this. First poem I read by you here and it's really good. I like what you are sharing in it. Simple poem but very deep. Thank you for this. Blessings!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from johnwilson
Yes, damn straight! This piece rocks! "Can't I step out of step?" --what a great line. The only part I would even suggest leaving out is the "sure did". I'm not sure why-ha! Every other word fits so perfectly, and now that I reread it, perhaps it needs to be there, because otherwise the, "I, let it go..." would sit by itself and not be as meaningful!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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Yes, damn straight! This piece rocks! "Can't I step out of step?" --what a great line. The only part I would even suggest leaving out is the "sure did". I'm not sure why-ha! Every other word fits so perfectly, and now that I reread it, perhaps it needs to be there, because otherwise the, "I, let it go..." would sit by itself and not be as meaningful!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2020
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John, this is a late reply.
However, I always have loved your
reviews. Please come back.
Doug
Comment from Richard Stephen Kram
The form of this poem really pulled me in to the thoughts and theme. The poem has impact, born of the message and the flow of words. Don't change any of it.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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The form of this poem really pulled me in to the thoughts and theme. The poem has impact, born of the message and the flow of words. Don't change any of it.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Very nice of you. Thank you.
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I read ur profile. U and I are far too similar. I feel sorry for U. LOL
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Victor,
This is a terrific message to readers like me that need a pep talk to find some self confidence. It sounds like you are well on your way to being positive and self assured. Well done.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Hello Victor,
This is a terrific message to readers like me that need a pep talk to find some self confidence. It sounds like you are well on your way to being positive and self assured. Well done.
Joy xx
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Joy. It is, naturally, easier to say than employ.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Just to Be, shows a revival of spirit that rises up out of whatever seemed final to strive again for the greatness that is waiting to be found again. Nice.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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This poem, Just to Be, shows a revival of spirit that rises up out of whatever seemed final to strive again for the greatness that is waiting to be found again. Nice.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from apky
A great source of inspiration - U-2.
Accompanied by the artwork which complements your poem,
you have depicted this inner reflection perfetly in your poem.
Words can make or break a person; they can form a child's personality for all his life, positive or negative.
It reminded me of the saying: history repeats itself. We are so much what we've already been. But we can pick ourselves up, forget the hurt and forge ahead.
Have a great weekend,
Apky
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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A great source of inspiration - U-2.
Accompanied by the artwork which complements your poem,
you have depicted this inner reflection perfetly in your poem.
Words can make or break a person; they can form a child's personality for all his life, positive or negative.
It reminded me of the saying: history repeats itself. We are so much what we've already been. But we can pick ourselves up, forget the hurt and forge ahead.
Have a great weekend,
Apky
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Victor,
A very thoughtful and thought provoking poem.
I agree ...How often do we waste lifes opportunities because of self doubt.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Hi Victor,
A very thoughtful and thought provoking poem.
I agree ...How often do we waste lifes opportunities because of self doubt.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Smile. Thank you.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I have read this poem several times. Each time, I appreciate the depth of it a little more. It seems so easy--just be yourself. I'm 65 and I have not yet figured out how to do that. I think that as I get older and demands on me lessen, " I am coming" as well. I just can't "be myself" and satisfy everyone's demands. And those demands are important. Your poem inspires me to keep reaching for myself because what I am is important. Thank you.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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I have read this poem several times. Each time, I appreciate the depth of it a little more. It seems so easy--just be yourself. I'm 65 and I have not yet figured out how to do that. I think that as I get older and demands on me lessen, " I am coming" as well. I just can't "be myself" and satisfy everyone's demands. And those demands are important. Your poem inspires me to keep reaching for myself because what I am is important. Thank you.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Yes, it is. Actually, the most important.
Comment from Janet Foor
I love the Bird of Paradise flower and it is a perfect one to depict "Just to Be" ourselves. It is unique as we are and we need to believe in ourselves.
Well done Victor.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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I love the Bird of Paradise flower and it is a perfect one to depict "Just to Be" ourselves. It is unique as we are and we need to believe in ourselves.
Well done Victor.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Janet.
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I like your message in this matter of fact free verse. What you say is that we should act like ourselves, be ourselves and most importantly, believe in ourselves. I couldn't agree more. Very well written. All the best. Ulla;))
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Hi there, I like your message in this matter of fact free verse. What you say is that we should act like ourselves, be ourselves and most importantly, believe in ourselves. I couldn't agree more. Very well written. All the best. Ulla;))
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you. Especially since I am currently going to court with my ex, Ulla. lol
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Well, I do understand that one. I've just been divorced 2 weeks ago. That's the second and last time as well. I hope it goes well for you. :)
