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Butterfat the Cat

Curiosity about kills a cat

16 total reviews 
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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This poem is cute and silly. Children, as well as adults, would enjoy the humor. The photo included depicting the baby and cat is perfect. As a cat lover, I enjoyed reading this.

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
    Thank you, Cindy. It's not my style. It's intended for children. That is why it is so silly. I think that my grandchildren will laugh at it. They will laugh at the photo for sure.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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haha that was one nosy cat. Good job on your poem for children. they will enjoy the subject & the rhymes that make for a bouncy rendition. Best wishes. thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
    Thank you, Jan.
Comment from mvbrooks
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Cut poem that appears in the tradition of a Mother Goose tale. The rhyme is clever and fun and the truth of cats climbing in cribs and babies soiling diapers makes it easy to relate to.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
    Thank you for those kind words.
Comment from Henry King
Exceptional
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What a delightful poem. The rhyme and story are magnificent. The picture is purr fection. I hope this becomes a classic FanStory, All Best Time poem.

I can just see all the kin folk running. Thank you very much.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
    Wow. You have made my day. I have never had such a complimentary review. Bless you.
reply by Henry King on 19-Mar-2018
    You are welcome. You deserve all the accolades.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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hahahahahah How did you find such a suitable picture? This was funny, clever and well written. I enjoyed it, and it's always good to have a laugh. Nicely done and I noticed no grammar or spelling errors, thanks, Ana.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
    Thank you, Ana. I remembered the picture from years ago and kept looking for it.
Comment from karenina
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Cats are amazing, are the not? They go where no man dared go before and do so with curiosity and no thought for their own well being! (LOL)

Karenina

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 Comment Written 19-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
    Thank you, karenina. I hope children will like this stinky poem.
reply by karenina on 19-Mar-2018
    For animals with such a keen sense of smell you'd think they'd know better!