Butterfat the Cat
Curiosity about kills a cat16 total reviews
Comment from strandregs
Butterfat the cat Butterfat the cat
In baby's bed sat. Sat in baby's cot
The odor was bad, the odor was so bad
Bout drove the cat mad. The cat just lost the plot
He grew way too hyper Too sensitive and hyper
From this smell in the diaper. Heard the baby crying
Baby woke a cryin From ikky stinky diaper
Mama came a spyin Mama came a flying
Papa came a runnin Pappa came a running
Grampa came a gunnin Cat you better scat
Better scat Grampa came a gunnin
You nosey cat! Beat it Butterfat
Self control Know your place
Should be your goal. It ain't in this space
just having fun,
and the last two lines are good, I just said them my way.
Great fun poem to read to children.
I have two cats at the moment and they are every where. :-))Z.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Butterfat the cat Butterfat the cat
In baby's bed sat. Sat in baby's cot
The odor was bad, the odor was so bad
Bout drove the cat mad. The cat just lost the plot
He grew way too hyper Too sensitive and hyper
From this smell in the diaper. Heard the baby crying
Baby woke a cryin From ikky stinky diaper
Mama came a spyin Mama came a flying
Papa came a runnin Pappa came a running
Grampa came a gunnin Cat you better scat
Better scat Grampa came a gunnin
You nosey cat! Beat it Butterfat
Self control Know your place
Should be your goal. It ain't in this space
just having fun,
and the last two lines are good, I just said them my way.
Great fun poem to read to children.
I have two cats at the moment and they are every where. :-))Z.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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I am glad Butterfat inspired you to verse. I am a novice poet for sure, but I think that Butterfat the fat has great potential with children.
Comment from Sasha
The title of this one really captured my attention. I think there should be a monthly contest for best title of the month. This would definitely get some votes. Fun poem and got me to giggle out loud. Very nice work with this fun and delightful poem.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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The title of this one really captured my attention. I think there should be a monthly contest for best title of the month. This would definitely get some votes. Fun poem and got me to giggle out loud. Very nice work with this fun and delightful poem.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2018
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What a sweet review. Thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Very cute one, Debbie! I was wondering why I wasn't getting notifications of your posts but I guess you have been posting for contests and I don't get notified of those. Great rhyming in this one and it's always been a concern about cats getting into the baby's crib so it's a relief that all the adults were on high alert.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Lol! Very cute one, Debbie! I was wondering why I wasn't getting notifications of your posts but I guess you have been posting for contests and I don't get notified of those. Great rhyming in this one and it's always been a concern about cats getting into the baby's crib so it's a relief that all the adults were on high alert.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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Thank you for looking for my posts. I tend to enter the daily prompts because the competition is less when you win play money. I enjoy writing the short pieces as well. I should have gone into advertising. I am working on some poems that I hope to enter later, when they are worthy of the competition. I am slow.
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No worries about the timing. Now that I know that's your style, I will check your profile now and then if I don't get any notices about your posts. Everyone has their style and pace.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. Yes, cats curiosity can get them in weird and awkward situations where they could meet their end. Babies can make the best stinking bombs. Lol
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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A very well-written poem. Yes, cats curiosity can get them in weird and awkward situations where they could meet their end. Babies can make the best stinking bombs. Lol
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thank you for reading my little poem, Sandra.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Butterfat the Cat, is hilarious as I can imagine the poor kitty flopping around after getting a whiff of a baby explosion. Kitty litter box might become a refuge. Funny.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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This poem, Butterfat the Cat, is hilarious as I can imagine the poor kitty flopping around after getting a whiff of a baby explosion. Kitty litter box might become a refuge. Funny.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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I agree. That?s where my cats hide.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really cute. I wouldn't have touched that diaper if I were that cat for anything in the world. You did an excellent job in describing all of the activities surrounding that pesky cat. I like this. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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This is really cute. I wouldn't have touched that diaper if I were that cat for anything in the world. You did an excellent job in describing all of the activities surrounding that pesky cat. I like this. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Jeffrey. I would not touch a hyper cat. Been there.
Comment from cailinraine8
This is cute and it tells such a funny story... kitties are so undeniably curious and this one is no exception. The baby in the picture seems unperturbed thank goodness. Nicely written and displayed and you get my vote.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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This is cute and it tells such a funny story... kitties are so undeniably curious and this one is no exception. The baby in the picture seems unperturbed thank goodness. Nicely written and displayed and you get my vote.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind words
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Thanks for your kind words
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL, That was hilarious! I can just imagine the smell. Poor little thing. (that could refer to either the cat or baby!)
Excellent contest entry. Well done and good luck! Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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LOL, That was hilarious! I can just imagine the smell. Poor little thing. (that could refer to either the cat or baby!)
Excellent contest entry. Well done and good luck! Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks
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Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Kiddies Motivational Poem writing prompt.
Your picture is a good and funny match.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Kiddies Motivational Poem writing prompt.
Your picture is a good and funny match.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Sharon
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Thank you, Sharon
Comment from Beck Fenton
Oh, your poetry gave me a good look into the child's nursery! Poor Butterfat!
Good writing and cadence and the poem flows very well. I wish you good luck in the contest.And by the way... the picture is a perfect fit.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Oh, your poetry gave me a good look into the child's nursery! Poor Butterfat!
Good writing and cadence and the poem flows very well. I wish you good luck in the contest.And by the way... the picture is a perfect fit.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks you for reviewing my silly poem.
