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Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Scene at a Play (Part 2)"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from Swampfox1
A play about people in a play. That is something else. I must say. IT is somewhat interesting but I just can't see a play about people in a play. But that is me and doesn't mean it doesn't exist. I would have liked to have seen an intro to this and perhaps some explanation, it would have helped to understand it. Good luck with your work.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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A play about people in a play. That is something else. I must say. IT is somewhat interesting but I just can't see a play about people in a play. But that is me and doesn't mean it doesn't exist. I would have liked to have seen an intro to this and perhaps some explanation, it would have helped to understand it. Good luck with your work.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2018
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This is part two, as it says. Thanks.
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Ok. Part Two that went by me really quick like. You're welcome
Comment from brenda faye curtis
It's been a long time since I read "Taming of the Shrew," but I get the gist of it. I think Ned's seen too much of "The Exorcist" too! Another gem. :)
Sorry I haven't been on line much lately-crazy work schedule right now.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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It's been a long time since I read "Taming of the Shrew," but I get the gist of it. I think Ned's seen too much of "The Exorcist" too! Another gem. :)
Sorry I haven't been on line much lately-crazy work schedule right now.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Brenda, for giving this a look. Bill
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from Pamusart
Nice ending. Lol. He really needs a prefix. I used to work for AT&T. So, I know. Just joshing with you. This was entertaining to read. What kind of accent is it that Ned is spearmint in? I will await the next chapter. Thank you fir sharing
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Nice ending. Lol. He really needs a prefix. I used to work for AT&T. So, I know. Just joshing with you. This was entertaining to read. What kind of accent is it that Ned is spearmint in? I will await the next chapter. Thank you fir sharing
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Pam. Ned is supposed to be mid-southeastern transplanted to mid-Western. Pons would be the baseline dialect. Ned has gotten dumber and his accent has deepened over the last couple years. I may need to revise him ?up? so he?s better understood.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
ahahaahaha You make this look easy, but to write dialect like this would be extremely difficult for me. I was pretty impressed with it, and your sense of humor is grand.
And the ending didn't disappoint, the final laugh. Thanks for sharing it, it's a work I'd recommend. Ana.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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ahahaahaha You make this look easy, but to write dialect like this would be extremely difficult for me. I was pretty impressed with it, and your sense of humor is grand.
And the ending didn't disappoint, the final laugh. Thanks for sharing it, it's a work I'd recommend. Ana.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Ana, for the encouraging review. Bill
Comment from emptypage
Hahahahaahaha.... why don't your scripts show up in my inbox? I just happened upon this. I get your poetry (which I am not qualified to judge). Weird.
I'm going back to read the other parts. This, though, is hilarious. I hope it is meant to be.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Hahahahaahaha.... why don't your scripts show up in my inbox? I just happened upon this. I get your poetry (which I am not qualified to judge). Weird.
I'm going back to read the other parts. This, though, is hilarious. I hope it is meant to be.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Ned and Pons are my favorite duo. I?m not sure why you don?t see them.
Comment from sandragee
I like the spin that Ned has on things. He sees what he sees and knows what he knows. Unfortunately, he doesn't know much.
"I thunk Shikspeer spoke Anglish"
I find Ned's assessment of Shakespeare writing hilarious.
Pons and Ned put a smile on my face. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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I like the spin that Ned has on things. He sees what he sees and knows what he knows. Unfortunately, he doesn't know much.
"I thunk Shikspeer spoke Anglish"
I find Ned's assessment of Shakespeare writing hilarious.
Pons and Ned put a smile on my face. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Sandra
Comment from Teri7
This is another cute script with Pons and Ned. This had me giggling a little as I was reading it. You used really cute dialogue in it. Great job! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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This is another cute script with Pons and Ned. This had me giggling a little as I was reading it. You used really cute dialogue in it. Great job! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Bill;
I really got a kick out of this. The Taming of the Shrew is one of my all-time favorites of the Shakespearean plays. I've seen in several different theatres and more versions than I thought possible.
Hearing/seeing this through your character's eyes was a delight. Well done. I only wish I had a six for this clever script.
~patty~
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Hi, Bill;
I really got a kick out of this. The Taming of the Shrew is one of my all-time favorites of the Shakespearean plays. I've seen in several different theatres and more versions than I thought possible.
Hearing/seeing this through your character's eyes was a delight. Well done. I only wish I had a six for this clever script.
~patty~
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Patty, for the great review. Bill
Comment from nomi338
Ned has quickly become my favorite character. He is so stupid that he is starting to make perfect sense. So what dies that say about me? His view of the world is not dimmed by the logic that can sometimes cause confusion, he knows what he knows, whatever that is and he just goes with it. Don't even bother trying to correct him, you will just further confuse matters. Just let him go, he'll be fine.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Ned has quickly become my favorite character. He is so stupid that he is starting to make perfect sense. So what dies that say about me? His view of the world is not dimmed by the logic that can sometimes cause confusion, he knows what he knows, whatever that is and he just goes with it. Don't even bother trying to correct him, you will just further confuse matters. Just let him go, he'll be fine.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Ned has a high IQ (Ignorance quotient).
Comment from Marge Setzer
Please do describe the scene. I'm afraid I need a little help. Once more, the conversation is a hoot. These characters are classic. And incidentally, I can relate to Ned's difficulty with hearing only mine isn't limited to silent films. I think it's a problem with the quality of the audio - ha! Marge
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Please do describe the scene. I'm afraid I need a little help. Once more, the conversation is a hoot. These characters are classic. And incidentally, I can relate to Ned's difficulty with hearing only mine isn't limited to silent films. I think it's a problem with the quality of the audio - ha! Marge
Comment Written 19-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Marge, for giving this a look. Bill
