My Sis
Big sister takes care of little sister11 total reviews
Comment from beizanten
iNTEREsting and well written first stanza, the warm mood flow well. Angsty and well written second stanza. The third and fourth stanza was well written. Acid? isn't that to cruel even for a cheater? Well written two last stanza. You have done great, keep up the great job okay!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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iNTEREsting and well written first stanza, the warm mood flow well. Angsty and well written second stanza. The third and fourth stanza was well written. Acid? isn't that to cruel even for a cheater? Well written two last stanza. You have done great, keep up the great job okay!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Lol. Acid in the car. Not a face. This is not a true story. The painting and the reading to her was real. Thank you for your love ly review and for the hobo fir your six star rating. Very aporeciated
