Oh, No!
Humorous 5-7-512 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, Oh, No!, looks right and reminds us the literal sense in which children receive information. This is funny because it could probably happen. Cute.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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This humorous 5-7-5, Oh, No!, looks right and reminds us the literal sense in which children receive information. This is funny because it could probably happen. Cute.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate it!
Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS for you, dear poet. Congrats you are leading. You received my thumbs up that placed youvib first by yourself. Wow! This short but sweet 5-7-5 is so humorous. Indeed, it made me laugh, and that surprise shocked expression on the little girl's face is so funny. The child must have been watching CSI Missing People's program. lol liberty justice
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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SIX STARS for you, dear poet. Congrats you are leading. You received my thumbs up that placed youvib first by yourself. Wow! This short but sweet 5-7-5 is so humorous. Indeed, it made me laugh, and that surprise shocked expression on the little girl's face is so funny. The child must have been watching CSI Missing People's program. lol liberty justice
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much Liberty! I appreciate the stars.
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Well rider for a brief moment and with that photo that went along with it it was a little humorous but could you really imagine a world without God there would be a world because he made it but it is a cute little gesture thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Well rider for a brief moment and with that photo that went along with it it was a little humorous but could you really imagine a world without God there would be a world because he made it but it is a cute little gesture thank you for sharing
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review.
Comment from Ogden
Your poem is hilarious! Mine is, too, but yours is hilariouser.
The verse, itself, is funny enough to win, and the illustration makes it even a lot funnier. So, if you come in first, your win is well-deserved.
Don (Ogden)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Your poem is hilarious! Mine is, too, but yours is hilariouser.
The verse, itself, is funny enough to win, and the illustration makes it even a lot funnier. So, if you come in first, your win is well-deserved.
Don (Ogden)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Haha. Cute! Thanks for the fun reply and review.
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You are quite welcome (he said sadly).
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I don't think that was the intent of the priest's question but it is a very cute response. What would we do if we thought we the Lord was "missing?" Guess, we'd be crying, too!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Lol. I don't think that was the intent of the priest's question but it is a very cute response. What would we do if we thought we the Lord was "missing?" Guess, we'd be crying, too!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much. It was a fun write. Hope everyone enjoys it too. I appreciate it!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your story of the missing God is clear in your few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your story of the missing God is clear in your few words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much. I appreciate it.
Comment from William Ross
Hahha, sounds like something a small child would say, a good humorous poem on the prompt. Good luck on this and have a great day
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Hahha, sounds like something a small child would say, a good humorous poem on the prompt. Good luck on this and have a great day
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much. I had fun with this one and hope everyone enjoys it. I appreciate the great review.
Comment from Wetbelly01
Oh yeah, I like this one...
Neat concept, could see this being a child's reaction.
Certainly don't see any problems with it.
Perfect for this contest, I do believe.
My compliments!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Oh yeah, I like this one...
Neat concept, could see this being a child's reaction.
Certainly don't see any problems with it.
Perfect for this contest, I do believe.
My compliments!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much. I had fun with this one and hope everyone enjoys it. I appreciate the great review.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Oh my goodness!
Smile for the day!
And I can certainly see how the actions in your humorous 5/7/5 could take place. I was one of those incredibly literal good Catholic girls. I held onto each and everything a sister or priest told me...at least until I went to high school. Thank you for the delightful read!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Oh my goodness!
Smile for the day!
And I can certainly see how the actions in your humorous 5/7/5 could take place. I was one of those incredibly literal good Catholic girls. I held onto each and everything a sister or priest told me...at least until I went to high school. Thank you for the delightful read!
diane
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much. I had fun with this one and hope everyone enjoys it. I appreciate the great review.
Comment from johnwilson
This is such a great presentation of verbal and visual art. I applaud you, because this is not my forte. The combination of the picture and the words made me laugh!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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This is such a great presentation of verbal and visual art. I applaud you, because this is not my forte. The combination of the picture and the words made me laugh!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much. I had fun with this one and hope everyone enjoys it. I appreciate the great review.
