Big Blue
A blue rooster is annoying27 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very cute little poem about a blue rooster.Nice and lighthearted unless you really are going to make chicken stew out of him. I loved your rhyme and your illustration. Well done. Jen.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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This is a very cute little poem about a blue rooster.Nice and lighthearted unless you really are going to make chicken stew out of him. I loved your rhyme and your illustration. Well done. Jen.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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No. I did not eat him. Never had one except in my painting. Thank you fir your lovely review and high rating
Comment from Debbie Pope
I love this poem. I did not need a rooster this morning. I couldn't sleep. This poem brought a smile to my tired face. Your rhymes are adorable--Blue and stew, emotion and commotion. Your rhyme choices are so connected to your theme and humor. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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I love this poem. I did not need a rooster this morning. I couldn't sleep. This poem brought a smile to my tired face. Your rhymes are adorable--Blue and stew, emotion and commotion. Your rhyme choices are so connected to your theme and humor. Excellent job.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Debbie for your lovely review and high rating. Glad you liked it
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Hey Pam I was just about to ask you did you kill the rooster, Mr. Big blue until I read your comment. Because my mom had chickens, hens and ducks and we lived in the country down a long dirt road from the main highway and when those chickens and ducks would hear the car turn off the road they would run down there to the road and meat my mom and follow her old Nova home. But what was awful to me is that when got ready to cook one, she had no hesitations to go out there, ring one of the hens neck and cook with rice or add dumplings. I couldn't eat it. But the old rooster she never toughed. I think a fox or a wolf finally got him. I might write about that. By the way you have 2 {its} in the beginning of the 3rd stanza. I don't know if this is an error or not, or should the first one be "if". Love the picture, so incredibly suitable for this piece.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Hey Pam I was just about to ask you did you kill the rooster, Mr. Big blue until I read your comment. Because my mom had chickens, hens and ducks and we lived in the country down a long dirt road from the main highway and when those chickens and ducks would hear the car turn off the road they would run down there to the road and meat my mom and follow her old Nova home. But what was awful to me is that when got ready to cook one, she had no hesitations to go out there, ring one of the hens neck and cook with rice or add dumplings. I couldn't eat it. But the old rooster she never toughed. I think a fox or a wolf finally got him. I might write about that. By the way you have 2 {its} in the beginning of the 3rd stanza. I don't know if this is an error or not, or should the first one be "if". Love the picture, so incredibly suitable for this piece.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Mary for your incredible teview and high rating. I do not see two it?s in a roe
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A blue rooster is a unique concept and this is another one of your lovely paintings Pam. Not sure you should make that chicken soup though, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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A blue rooster is a unique concept and this is another one of your lovely paintings Pam. Not sure you should make that chicken soup though, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Lol. I did not. This is totally fictional. Thank you for your lovely review and high rating
Comment from Wetbelly01
I Like IT!... The rooster back on the Grandfolk's farm
was a struttin', ferocious cock-o-the walk...
We DID make a stew out of him!
My compliments on this cool piece!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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I Like IT!... The rooster back on the Grandfolk's farm
was a struttin', ferocious cock-o-the walk...
We DID make a stew out of him!
My compliments on this cool piece!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Wetbelly01 for your lovely teview and high rating. I made sure people knew this I?d fivtion because animal lovers would come after me
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You're very welcome!
The rooster stew we had...
Tasted mighty GOOD!
Comment from karenina
Hah! Witty and ironic that nature brings such irritants....your meter matches the spirit of frustration and ire. Big Blue as stew? Unexpected and yet....(oh no you must not....maybe?) Laughing here......
Karenina
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Hah! Witty and ironic that nature brings such irritants....your meter matches the spirit of frustration and ire. Big Blue as stew? Unexpected and yet....(oh no you must not....maybe?) Laughing here......
Karenina
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Thank you, karenina for your lovely review and high rating. I was aiming for the chuckle. I put in my notes that it is fiction not true
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Hmmm...a chicken sandwich sounds tasty! (Smile)
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Lol
Comment from Alexander Vasa
haahahaha Sounds like you have got it in for that Rooster. They are annoying so early in the morning. Your poem is funny and original. I enjoyed it and the lovely art you've used to publish it with. I only noted the stray question marks above the title, I think it's in the description. Thanks for sharing your poem, Ana.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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haahahaha Sounds like you have got it in for that Rooster. They are annoying so early in the morning. Your poem is funny and original. I enjoyed it and the lovely art you've used to publish it with. I only noted the stray question marks above the title, I think it's in the description. Thanks for sharing your poem, Ana.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Ana for letting me know. Thank you for chuckling with me over this post. Funny ending. Thank you for your lovely review and high rating
