The Scream
Someone hears a scream17 total reviews
Comment from Winslow
Dear Pamusart,
A scream from whom and you really know the answer. A well composed verse that leads to a poignant ending. For the author realizes the scream of pain comes from deep within.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Dear Pamusart,
A scream from whom and you really know the answer. A well composed verse that leads to a poignant ending. For the author realizes the scream of pain comes from deep within.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Thank you, again, Winslow for such a high rating of six stars and for your lovely cpmments
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The scream of autumn and the dread of winter I hear in your poem, goodbye to the sun and warmth, exposing fears of the cold, but spring is coming now Pam, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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The scream of autumn and the dread of winter I hear in your poem, goodbye to the sun and warmth, exposing fears of the cold, but spring is coming now Pam, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Dolly for your nice review and rating
Comment from oliver818
This is a powerful little poem, I enjoyed it. The scream is a great image, and it really makes the reader think about what could be causing it. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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This is a powerful little poem, I enjoyed it. The scream is a great image, and it really makes the reader think about what could be causing it. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Oliver818 for your nice review and rating
Comment from Alexander Vasa
You write vibrantly, and the ending is very moving. The scream belonging to you and your awareness that time heals. Love the painting. Bright, and engaging, so it suits this work very nicely. Thanks for sharing your poem with me, Ana.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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You write vibrantly, and the ending is very moving. The scream belonging to you and your awareness that time heals. Love the painting. Bright, and engaging, so it suits this work very nicely. Thanks for sharing your poem with me, Ana.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Thank you. The painting shows a spurned bridesmaid at her ex husband?s new wedding. Thank
You for your nice review and I rating
Comment from karenina
First you hook us with the title, then you enchant us with your scene and THEN (aha) the emotional knife twists and I am left breathless and a bit in awe! Clear by now I live your style!
Indeed!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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First you hook us with the title, then you enchant us with your scene and THEN (aha) the emotional knife twists and I am left breathless and a bit in awe! Clear by now I live your style!
Indeed!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Thank you, karenina for your lovely review and high rating. I am glad you like it
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I did. You are talented!
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Thank you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks in a monologue; an illusion of hearing a scream that came out from within the heart broke and it will heal over time; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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This speaks in a monologue; an illusion of hearing a scream that came out from within the heart broke and it will heal over time; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Alcreator for your nice review and rating
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Pam you are such a compassionate writer. The Fall colors the array and color scheme and then your writing on the fall season and the scream that you refer to being yours. Im thinking that with time all wounds and despair will heal. Because season there is a reason and a purpose. Great presentation as always
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Pam you are such a compassionate writer. The Fall colors the array and color scheme and then your writing on the fall season and the scream that you refer to being yours. Im thinking that with time all wounds and despair will heal. Because season there is a reason and a purpose. Great presentation as always
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Mary for your lovely review and high rating. I chose summer to fall because of the colors and because it portends winter
