Whipping Waves
Cyclone off our coastline13 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is such a well written poem--so full of poetic devices that make it fluid and special. For instance, the internal rhymes like waves and caves. The repetition of lines is also so effective. The parallel structure like children paddling, dogs barking is another example of your fine tuning. In summation, it is just lovely.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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This is such a well written poem--so full of poetic devices that make it fluid and special. For instance, the internal rhymes like waves and caves. The repetition of lines is also so effective. The parallel structure like children paddling, dogs barking is another example of your fine tuning. In summation, it is just lovely.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Sasha
You do a marvelous job describing the danger and power of a cyclone. I have been in one hurricane and it was terrifying. I had no idea there could be so much damage done in so few minutes. Excellent work with this, filled with awesome imagery. Keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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You do a marvelous job describing the danger and power of a cyclone. I have been in one hurricane and it was terrifying. I had no idea there could be so much damage done in so few minutes. Excellent work with this, filled with awesome imagery. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Hello Sasha, Being in a hurricane would be terrifying. Goes to show, we are not in control of the weather or the world, God is!
Bless you girl. XXK
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It was terrifying...it happened in 1991 and I remember it as though it happened yesterday.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Your well written verse is a good description of the terrible power of nature and storms.
We can only huddle in fear and let it rage on, we certainly can't stop it.
Thank you for sharing this incredible story and the picture.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Your well written verse is a good description of the terrible power of nature and storms.
We can only huddle in fear and let it rage on, we certainly can't stop it.
Thank you for sharing this incredible story and the picture.
Sharon
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for reading, glad you liked my writing. Blessings, Kay.
