When, Why, What
3 W's of life....a free verse42 total reviews
Comment from Cybertron1986
One of the deepest pieces I've encountered in a long while. The presentation has a direct, rather than poetic rhyme voice to it that I find appealing as a reader. The gradual and preceding questions projected a good build up of interest that connected me to the last sentence. Well done!
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One of the deepest pieces I've encountered in a long while. The presentation has a direct, rather than poetic rhyme voice to it that I find appealing as a reader. The gradual and preceding questions projected a good build up of interest that connected me to the last sentence. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
Comment from dragonpoet
Sometimes we all question our faith. But God is always there if you take the time to look. Without love there is no life that is why we chose to love even if one day that person will be gone.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Sometimes we all question our faith. But God is always there if you take the time to look. Without love there is no life that is why we chose to love even if one day that person will be gone.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
