I Am a Clock
what defines us anyway?42 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
It is really nice when time does not matter. It happens rarely. A clock without a face. That is good and profound. I sell clocks without faces. Lol. Only man has the concept of time except for basic instinctual
Things like being up during the day and hiding at night. But,
It is due to external factors. An antelope May know that a certain leopard stops
By every day looking for prey. Avoiding being there at that time is a necessity. Enjoyable poem. Thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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It is really nice when time does not matter. It happens rarely. A clock without a face. That is good and profound. I sell clocks without faces. Lol. Only man has the concept of time except for basic instinctual
Things like being up during the day and hiding at night. But,
It is due to external factors. An antelope May know that a certain leopard stops
By every day looking for prey. Avoiding being there at that time is a necessity. Enjoyable poem. Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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It is rather abstract and a departure for me....I got to thinking how we all race around to this man made concept that cannot me seen and is measured but is all in our imagination.....and my muse began drinking that Tequila (No not true!)---Anyway....I wrote it, took a deep breath, and posted it! I can't always play it safe right?
Thanks for my first review on this one!
Karenina
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First time I?ve ever come in first! Don?t know what to do. Lol. Just kidding
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You are too sweet!-Karenina
Comment from Katie Solis
This was so good. I like how eventually everyone's face changes, but it does not change the inside. When you have quality inside, it will last you forever, and remain quality, no matter what scars the outside.
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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This was so good. I like how eventually everyone's face changes, but it does not change the inside. When you have quality inside, it will last you forever, and remain quality, no matter what scars the outside.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Yes! Abstract and somewhat off the wall but the meaning came through! AHA! It's nice to go out of my comfort zone now and again and see what comes of it! Many thanks...I can go to bed knowing "Hey, Katie got it!"---- :)
Karenina
