Comment from jppoet

Excellent

Wow. this is quite a great story. A gifted author, you have complete command of language, a keen sense of dialogue,of story-pace and
suspense. blessings, john

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018

Thank you, John. I'm glad it came across that way to you. One often wonders in what's in your head comes out where others can understand.

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Rhonda;
I am really enjoying this story as it takes on this mythical mythology. I can't wait to see what Thanatos's home looks like through the eyes of Nara. I wonder who she really is?

~patty~

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 Comment Written 13-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018

Thank you, Patty. I think I was reviewing yours as you were reviewing mine! Cool.
Yes, mythology is rearing it's head even more, now.
Nara is definitely someone of importance, or so Thanatos thinks she is... We'll see.

Thanks again,
Rhonda