Penitence
A Naani15 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the feeling the regret of wrong doing mostly never goes with, guilt consciousness remains unsatisfied; well written, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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This speaks the feeling the regret of wrong doing mostly never goes with, guilt consciousness remains unsatisfied; well written, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Hello my friend I am glad you stopped by and I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
There seem to be some strong entries for the competition and this Naani poem is no exception. I liked it and it reminds me that we all have things we are not proud of, I know I do. Thanks for sharing your poetry, and best of luck in the competition, Ana.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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There seem to be some strong entries for the competition and this Naani poem is no exception. I liked it and it reminds me that we all have things we are not proud of, I know I do. Thanks for sharing your poetry, and best of luck in the competition, Ana.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Hello Ana, my friend, I appreciate your visit and am pleased to read your encouraging review; thank you very much.
Comment from cailinraine8
Nice work.... how often do we set our hearts and minds on some goal or achievement and then totally make a mess of the situation... then the old enemy guilt which is SO heavy shows up and we think we have to shoulder that instead of forgiving ourselves. The burden is then only ours. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Nice work.... how often do we set our hearts and minds on some goal or achievement and then totally make a mess of the situation... then the old enemy guilt which is SO heavy shows up and we think we have to shoulder that instead of forgiving ourselves. The burden is then only ours. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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hello friend, I appreciate your time and the wonderful insights; thank you very much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Naani Poetry writing prompt.
You tell a story of remorse and an in-quenched soul in your 4 line poem.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Naani Poetry writing prompt.
You tell a story of remorse and an in-quenched soul in your 4 line poem.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
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hello Sharon, I thank you for your visit and the kind review; thank you my friend.
Comment from prettybluebirds
You did a great job of choosing the artwork for this little poem. It is perfect and compliments the writing. This is a great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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You did a great job of choosing the artwork for this little poem. It is perfect and compliments the writing. This is a great entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Hello friend, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review; glad you like the write; thank you very much.
