Echoing Silence
Naani contest entry39 total reviews
Comment from Zue65
The message was so sad. Bidding goodbyes ca n be real sad and departing can be a difficult thing to do. You were able to catch fully the pain of separation in so few words. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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The message was so sad. Bidding goodbyes ca n be real sad and departing can be a difficult thing to do. You were able to catch fully the pain of separation in so few words. Keep writing.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Hello nassus1957,
Thank you for appreciating my verse and your excellent review.
diane
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very good. We seem to play and replay the conversations in our head, but does it change anything? Good little naani on missing someone and regret. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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This is very good. We seem to play and replay the conversations in our head, but does it change anything? Good little naani on missing someone and regret. Marilyn
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Hello Marilyn,
Thank you for your thoughtful review and for appreciating my verse...
diane
Comment from His Grayness
While I'm not an authority of this style of poetry, I can report that this work is beautifully and perfectly done. The artwork seemed a bit uncommon but I have no suggestions to improve this work and thank this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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While I'm not an authority of this style of poetry, I can report that this work is beautifully and perfectly done. The artwork seemed a bit uncommon but I have no suggestions to improve this work and thank this author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Hello Vance,
Thank you for your thoughtful and complimentary review!
diane
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My joy Diane...thanks to you! Vance
Comment from royowen
Isn't it amazing how some words will react and repeat in one's mind for ages after the event. A beautifully written and presented Naani as an entrant in this contest, a perfect syllable and lone count for the contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Isn't it amazing how some words will react and repeat in one's mind for ages after the event. A beautifully written and presented Naani as an entrant in this contest, a perfect syllable and lone count for the contest, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Hello Roy!
So pleased you enjoyed.
Thank you ever so much for your thoughtful and complimentary review!
diane
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Most welcome Diane good luck,
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Intense and one can feel what your words convey. That is what makes for excellent poetry, in my opinion I loved the picture choice also with this. Parting words . . . ug. It makes me hurt thinking about them. Been there. Great job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Intense and one can feel what your words convey. That is what makes for excellent poetry, in my opinion I loved the picture choice also with this. Parting words . . . ug. It makes me hurt thinking about them. Been there. Great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Hello Wendy!
This one was difficult to pen...
Thank you for your thoughtful and kind review...
diane
Comment from zekeziemann
You said a great deal in this short well written poem. The last line is very important to the poem and makes the "pain" clear. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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You said a great deal in this short well written poem. The last line is very important to the poem and makes the "pain" clear. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Hello Friend!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your thoughtful and kind review!
diane
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Time and distance refuse to heal
what memory still can hear'
I hear you...I have felt this in the past it takes me years to get over a broken relationship and I do not see other people. I am happily married now but I remember this pain. Well done and good luck love Meia x
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Time and distance refuse to heal
what memory still can hear'
I hear you...I have felt this in the past it takes me years to get over a broken relationship and I do not see other people. I am happily married now but I remember this pain. Well done and good luck love Meia x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Hello Meia,
I have felt it as well...
Thank you ever so much for your thoughtful and complimentary review!
diane
Comment from kathleenspalding
OOooo! Excellent Naani poem conveys a great truth - very hard to get over something when the memory is fresh and painful. I see no errors. Well done!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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OOooo! Excellent Naani poem conveys a great truth - very hard to get over something when the memory is fresh and painful. I see no errors. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Hello Kathleen,
So very pleased you stopped by and enjoyed my verse.
Thank you for your complimentary and kind review...
diane
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You're welcome
Comment from cailinraine8
Memories hold no matter how hard we might try to get rid of them sometimes. The picture seems appropriate, in that it portrays many strands of thought, nature, light, all of what we are made of. I think you have made a good job of this!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Memories hold no matter how hard we might try to get rid of them sometimes. The picture seems appropriate, in that it portrays many strands of thought, nature, light, all of what we are made of. I think you have made a good job of this!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018
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Hello Cailin,
So very pleased you appreciated my verse.
Thank you for your thoughtful and complimentary review...
diane
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a poignant poem. Well done. I like your use of punctuation and capitalization. It divides your words into two parts as they should be. It very much helps with the reading. And the fact that you do not use a period at the end is also an effective technique. It leaves your words echoing with the reader as they do in the silence and your memory. Nice job all around.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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What a poignant poem. Well done. I like your use of punctuation and capitalization. It divides your words into two parts as they should be. It very much helps with the reading. And the fact that you do not use a period at the end is also an effective technique. It leaves your words echoing with the reader as they do in the silence and your memory. Nice job all around.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
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Hello Debbie!
Thank you for appreciating my work and your thoughtful review. These small poems are challenging for me to pen!
Thank you again,
diane
